My dDay tToday My Day Today

My dDay tToday My Day Today

Today was an easy day., Today was an easy day,

TAlthough, that was only on the surface only. Although, that was only on the surface.

Moving "only" to a more natural place, but the original placement is also correct.

That wasbut only on the surface only. but only on the surface.

I think these past two sentences should be combined.

That wasExcept, on the surface only. Except, on the surface only.

Not wrong, but this might be a more natural way of saying this. "Except" can emphasize that this sentence challenges the sentence which came before. Another alternative (this might actually be even better): "At least, it was on the surface."

WMy workload was light, so I had a lot of time to think about the next steps of my life, and that is basically why I am here today writing this. My workload was light, so I had a lot of time to think about the next steps of my life, and that is basically why I am here today writing this.

WThe workload was light,; I had a lot of time to think about the next steps of my life, and that is basically why I am here today writing this. The workload was light; I had a lot of time to think about the next steps of my life, and that is basically why I am here today writing this.

Workload was light, so I had a lot of time to think about the next steps ofin my life and that is basically why I am here today writing this. Workload was light, so I had a lot of time to think about the next steps in my life and that is basically why I am here today writing this.

"next steps of my life" sounds a little weird, though it's kind of hard to explain why. To me, "of" implies ownership, so it feels weird for "my life" to own "the next steps".

I challenged myself to try to improve my writing skills because even though I can say I dominate've mastered the English leanguajge to a capacityertain extent, it never feels like enough. I challenged myself to try to improve my writing skills because even though I can say I've mastered the English language to a certain extent, it never feels like enough.

I challenged myself to try to improve my writing skills because even though I can say I dominate the English leanguajge to a capacity, it never feels like enough. I challenged myself to try to improve my writing skills because even though I can say I dominate the English language to a capacity, it never feels like enough.

I'm challengeding myself to try toand improve my writing skills because even though I can say I dominate've mastered the English leanguajge to asome capacity, it never feels like enough. I'm challenging myself to try and improve my writing skills because even though I can say I've mastered the English language to some capacity, it never feels like enough.

Most of these corrections are simply slightly more natural alternative phrasings (except "lenguaje" isn't an English word). Although, I will say that the usage of "dominate" felt particularly strange to me. To me, it feels like a very dramatic word, and it feels strange to use it to mean you are simply good at or know a lot about something. It's far more common to say you have mastered something.

I challenged myself to try to improve my writing skills because even though I can say I dominate the English lenguajge to a capacity, it never feels like enough. I challenged myself to try to improve my writing skills because even though I can say I dominate the English lenguage to a capacity, it never feels like enough.

Please help me rate or correct this to know where I can I start improving. Please help me rate or correct this to know where I can start improving.

Please help me rate or correct this to know where I can I start improving. Please help me rate or correct this to know where I can start improving.