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tana_gao

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My new friend

It’s a little crazy, but I do believe that friendship would occur in some place that you cannot believe. And people are really different when you stay with them and when you hear them from others.

My new friend has a easy remember name, and he is experienced(I would love to describe that he is as old as my uncle, how to write it in English polite? Thanks for your help). In some ways I could see some similarities between him and my father: popular and love to make new friends, don’t hesitate to spend money when staying with friends, has an excellent memory, also know much about how to play romantic tricks in life.

When staying with him, I feel comfortable, full of the energy to try new things and learn to think about how to treat the world more.

And the trip to the Indian street with his guide really means a lot for me. I would write it in the next article.

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Dec. 11, 2022

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And people are really different when you stay (?) with them andcompared to when you hear about them from others.

When you “stay with” someone, you sleep in their home or perhaps share a hotel room with them. Is this what you mean?

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Dec. 11, 2022

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Dec. 11, 2022

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In that case, Onediamond’s correction works well: “And people are really different when you're with them compared to when you hear about them from others.”

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Dec. 11, 2022

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My new friend


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And people are really different when you stay with them and when you hear them from others.


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And people are really different when you stay (?) with them andcompared to when you hear about them from others. And people are really different when you stay (?) with them compared to when you hear about them from others.

When you “stay with” someone, you sleep in their home or perhaps share a hotel room with them. Is this what you mean?

And people are really different when you stay with them and when you hear about them from others. And people are really different when you stay with them and when you hear about them from others.

My new friend has a easy remember name, and he is experienced(I would love to describe that he is as old as my uncle, how to write it in English polite? Thanks for your help).


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I think this is what you're trying to say: "My new friend has an easy to remember name and he is like an uncle to me. "

In some ways I could see some similarities between him and my father: popular and love to make new friends, don’t hesitate to spend money when staying with friends, has an excellent memory, also know much about how to play romantic tricks in life.


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When staying with him, I feel comfortable, full of the energy to try new things and learn to think about how to treat the world more.


When staying with him, I feel comfortable, full of the energy to try new things and learn to think about how to treat the world morebetter. When staying with him, I feel comfortable, full of energy to try new things and learn to think about how to treat the world better.

When staying with him, I feel comfortable, full of the energy to try new things and learn to think about how to treat the world morebetter. When staying with him, I feel comfortable, full of energy to try new things and learn to think about how to treat the world better.

That sounds awesome!

And the trip to the Indian street with his guide really means a lot for me.


And the trip to the Indian street with his guide really means a lot forto me. And the trip to the Indian street with his guide really means a lot to me.

I would write it in the next article.


I wouldill write it in the next article. I will write it in the next article.

I wouldill write about it in themy next articlejournal entry. I will write about it in my next journal entry.

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