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May 15, 2020

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Bad Day.

Today is a bad day, I heard bad news from my company. I will be fired in a month. Then I received a form from another company that I failed in the interview. Finally, my father yelled at me because I forget to bring his stuff to my house. I fell terrible. I cried, I don’t know what am I gonna do. I fell stressed. I am thinking to get out of my house but I don’t have enough money. I will find a new job next week. I hope everything will be ok.

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May 16, 2020

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Bad Day.

I will be fired in a month.

I will find a new job next week.

I hope everything will be ok.

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May 16, 2020

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May 20, 2020

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Bad Day.

Finally, my father yelled at me because I forget to bring his stuff to my house.

I fell terrible.

I will find a new job next week.

I hope everything will be ok.

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May 16, 2020

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Bad Day.

I will be fired in a month.

Finally, my father yelled at me because I forget to bring his stuff to my house.

I will find a new job next week.

I hope everything will be ok.

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hiep

May 16, 2020

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Bad Day.

I will be fired in a month.

Then I received a form from another company that I failed in the interview.

I will find a new job next week.

I hope everything will be ok.

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hiep

May 16, 2020

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Bad Day.


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Today is a bad day, I heard bad news from my company.


Today iwas a bad day,. I heard bad news from my company. Today was a bad day. I heard bad news from my company.

To make this one sentence, write something like "Today was a bad day, because I heard bad news from my company."

Today is a bad day, because I heard bad news from my company. Today is a bad day, because I heard bad news from my company.

This sentence has to have a transition word because there are two different clauses (ideas). I put "because", but "since" would also work :)

Today iwas a bad day,: I heard bad news from my company. Today was a bad day: I heard bad news from my company.

Today iwas a bad day, because I heard badawful news from my company. Today was a bad day because I heard awful news from my company.

You're talking about today overall, therefore it should be 'Was' not 'is. 'Today was a bad day' and 'I heard bad news from my company' are two independent clauses. They should either be two separate sentences, or they should be one, with a connective (Not a comma) such as a semicolon, or the word 'because'. Better not to say 'bad' twice; use a synonym, such as 'awful' or 'terrible.

Today ishas been a bad day, I hearreceived bad news from my company. Today has been a bad day, I received bad news from my company.

You can also say "Today is a bad day," but it might sound a little odd since it uses present tense.

I will be fired in a month.


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I will be firedlet go in a month. I will be let go in a month.

"Fired" describes the action itself, of deciding to end someone's employment for reasons related to their performance. So here, it would be more accurate to say something like, "They fired me with one month's notice." "Let go" can be used more loosely to refer to when you actually leave. Note also that there is a difference between "let go," "fired," and "laid off." The beginning of the response here explains it: https://www.askamanager.org/2008/12/resigned-or-let-go.html

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Then I received a form from another company that I failed in the interview.


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Then, I received a form from another company that I failed in their interview. Then, I received a form from another company that I failed their interview.

"their interview" sounds smoother than "in the interview" Also, I put a comma after "Then" because it is being used as a transition word in the beginning of the sentence. Any transition words at the beginning of the sentence need a comma (with a few exceptions - but most need it)

Then I received a formletter from another company telling me that I failed in their interview. Then I received a letter from another company telling me that I failed their interview.

Then I received a form from another company that I had failed in the interview. Then I received a form from another company that I had failed in the interview.

Then I received a form from another company that I failed in the interview. Then I received a form from another company that I failed the interview.

Then I received a formletter from another company to inform me that I failed in their interview. Then I received a letter from another company to inform me that I failed their interview.

Finally, my father yelled at me because I forget to bring his stuff to my house.


Finally, my father yelled at me because I forget to bring his stuff to my houshome. Finally, my father yelled at me because I forget to bring his stuff home.

This clarifies the sentence and sounds more natural, unless you and your father were living in separate homes.

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Finally, my father yelled at me because I forgeot to bring his stuff to my house. Finally, my father yelled at me because I forgot to bring his stuff to my house.

I fell terrible.


I fellt terrible. I felt terrible.

I assume this was a typo.

I felel terrible. I feel terrible.

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I felel terrible. I feel terrible.

'Fell' is the past tense of 'fall' as in 'I fell down the stairs'.

I felel terrible. I feel terrible.

I fellt terrible. I felt terrible.

I cried, I don’t know what am I gonna do.


I cried,. I don’t know what am I gonnaing to do. I cried. I don’t know what am I going to do.

"gonna" is very informal, and would only be appropriate in something like a casual email.

I cried,; I don’t know what I am I gonnagoing to do. I cried; I don’t know what I am going to do.

So, these are two separate sentences. On its own, each sentence has its own meaning and they are fully functional. When you want to combine two sentences, you use ";" instead of ","

I cried,. I don’t know what I am I gonnagoing to do. I cried. I don’t know what I am going to do.

When expressing implicit questions in a declarative sentence, inversion is not used.

I cried,; I don’t know what am I gonna do. I cried; I don’t know what am I gonna do.

Like I said above, two independent clauses that should be joined together by a connective or separated into two sentences. Here, it could be a semicolon so that the sentences aren't too short.

I cried, I don’t know what I am I gonnagoing to do. I cried, I don’t know what I am going to do.

You can also say "gonna do" but that is more slang than formal speech.

I cried,. I don’t know what I am I gonna do. I cried. I don’t know what I am gonna do.

Or: I cried "I don't know what I am gonna do!"

I fell stressed.


I fellt stressed. I felt stressed.

I felel stressed. I feel stressed.

I fellt stressed. I felt stressed.

I felel stressed. I feel stressed.

I felel stressed. I feel stressed.

I fellt stressed. I felt stressed.

I am thinking to get out of my house but I don’t have enough money.


I am thinking tof getting out of my house, but I don’t have enough money. I am thinking of getting out of my house, but I don’t have enough money.

I am thinking to getabout getting out of my house, but I don’t have enough money. I am thinking about getting out of my house, but I don’t have enough money.

I am thinking to getabout getting out of my house but I don’t have enough money. I am thinking about getting out of my house but I don’t have enough money.

"Getting out of my house" doesn't make sense here, since "your house" is generally always where you live. Do you perhaps mean, "getting out of my parents' house"? You could also say, "I'm thinking of changing my living situation."

I am thinking to get out ofof leaving my house, but I don’t have enough money. I am thinking of leaving my house, but I don’t have enough money.

Comma after 'but'. 'To get out of your house' is basically leaving, so you can say that instead. Also, it's 'I'm thinking of', not 'I'm thinking to'.

I am thinking about ways to leave my house, but I don’t have enough money. I am trying to get out of my house, but I don't have enough money. I am thinking about ways to leave my house, but I don’t have enough money. I am trying to get out of my house, but I don't have enough money.

I am thinking of ways to get out of my house but I don’t have enough money. I am thinking of ways to get out of my house but I don’t have enough money.

Get out of your house... to distract yourself from your hard situation? Because then the expression is "out of the house"

I will find a new job next week.


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I hope everything will be ok.


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