But finally myAnyways, the book I ordered (Andy Weir - The Martian) finally arrived and I started reading it. Anyways, the book I ordered (Andy Weir - The Martian) finally arrived and I started reading it.

Can’t use a conjunction if you are trying to switch topics. i removed and changed the other of a couple words to make it read better.

But finally mythe book I ordered (Andy Weir - The Martian) arrived and I started reading it. But finally the book I ordered (Andy Weir - The Martian) arrived and I started reading it.

But finally my book I ordered (Andy Weir - 's "The Martian)" and it arrived and. I started reading it. I ordered Andy Weir's "The Martian" and it arrived. I started reading it.

Funny word (If it really exists). Funny word (If it really exists).

It flows better with the sentences connected. Of course, only include this if you keep the word you made up.

Funny word. Funny word.

If it's really exists. If it really exists.

If it's really exists. If it's really exists.

Same feedback as the last.

If it's really exists. If it really exists.

I'm surprised that it really is a real word...

Maybe tomorrow. Maybe tomorrow.

In the evenings, I struggle with writing, because I'm tired, and I don't feel like it. In the evenings, I struggle with writing because I'm tired and I don't feel like it.

In the evenings I struggle with writing, because I'm tired, and I don't feel like it. In the evenings I struggle with writing because I'm tired, and I don't feel like it.

Better later than never, but better sooner than later. Better late than never, but better sooner than later.

Better later than never, but better sooner than later. Better late than never, but better sooner than later.

Better later than never, but better sooner rather than later. Better later than never, but better sooner rather than later.

Better later than never, but better sooner than later. Better late than never, but better soon than later.

It's unputdownableaddicting. It's addicting.

That’s not a word 😭😭😭, good attempt though. I fixed it to be correct, but a more fluid way of saying it would be to talk about yourself and not the book. For example: “I can’t stop reading it” or “I can’t seem to put it down.”

It's unputdownable can't put it down. I can't put it down.

A common phrase you could use instead here is "it's a real page-turner" as it's said often by native speakers

It's unputdownableaddicting. It's addicting.

that is NOT a word in english