April 23, 2021
My planners and journals
Since my military service, I have tried to write my planners and journals every day.
For reporting my captain , I had to write daily, weekly and monthly planners.
At the same time, I started to write my journals when I had a free time.
Now, I have been writing them for 15 years and I have 2 planners and 3 journals.
The planners are works of my job and for my self development.
I transferred them from paper to online tools 5 years ago.
Because I always have my smart phone anytime, it is easy to access the planners by online.
The journals are also for different purposes.
The first journal is about my emotion.
It is kind of the cognitive treatments that I can find out why I am mad or sad.
After writing the diary, I can reduce my stress.
The second journal is about new experiences.
When I do or know new things, I write it more than one sentence.
Not only cleaning my room, but also quotes from books are topic of the journal.
It helps to improve my routines, especially learning English.
The last journal is called 10 years journal. (Actually I can't describe this journal clearly.)
Each page of the journal is for the same days in different years.
For example, there are journals from 2011 to 2021 on April 23rd page.
So I can review my old days what I did on the same day in 2011, what I did on the same day in 2016.
This journal gives me inspirations.
These are all of my planners and journals.
I highly recommend to write anything every day, and someday it will make it up to you .
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Since my military service, I have tried to write in my planners and journals every day. Since my military service, I have tried to write in my planners and journals every day.
To me 'write my planners' doesn't seem natural. This may be a British English thing though.
For reporting to my captain , I had to write daily, weekly and monthly planners.
For reporting to my captain I had to write daily, weekly and monthly planners.
At the same time, I started to write my journals when I had aa personal journal in my free time.
At the same time, I started to write a personal journal in my free time.
Now, I have been writing them for 15 years and I have 2 planners and 3 journals.
The planners are for works of my job and for my self development.
The planners are for work and for my self development.
I transferred them from paper to online tools 5 years ago.
Because I always have my smart phone anytime, it is easy to access the planners by online.
Because I always have my smart phone, it is easy to access the planners online.
The journals are also for different purposes.
The first journal is aboutto record my emotions.
The first journal is to record my emotions.
It isWriting this journal is a kind of the cognitive treatments that by which I can find out why I am mad or sad.
Writing this journal is a kind of cognitive treatment by which I can find out why I am mad or sad.
After wWriting the diary, I can reduces my stress.
Writing the diary reduces my stress.
The second journal is about new experiences.
When I do or know new learn somethings new, I write iat more thanleast one sentence.
When I do or learn something new, I write at least one sentence.
Not only things like cleaning my room, but also quotes from books are topic of the journal. Not only things like cleaning my room, but also quotes from books are topic of the journal.
It helps to improve my routines, especially learning English.
The last journal is called a/my 10 years journal. The last journal is called a/my 10 years journal.
Each page of the journal is for the same days in(of the year) across different years.
Each page of the journal is the same days (of the year) across different years.
For example, there are journals fromentries for 2011 to 2021 on the April 23rd page.
For example, there are entries for 2011 to 2021 on the April 23rd page.
SoUsing this journey I can review my old days what I did on the same day in 2011, what I did on the same day and in 2016.
Using this journey I can review what I did on the same day in 2011 and in 2016.
This journal gives me inspirations.
This journal gives me inspiration.
It's unusual to pluralise 'inspiration', although you could in a poetic sense.
These areat's all ofor my planners and journals.
That's all for my planners and journals.
I highly recommend to write anything every day, and; some day ityou will make it up to you benefit.
I highly recommend writing every day; some day you will benefit.
'Make it up' is usually used when talking about something good after doing something bad to someone. 'I'm so sorry I was late, let me buy you a drink to make it up to you.'
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Nice work! I think this is a great idea to improve your habits and give you something to reflect upon.
April 24, 2021
This journal gives me inspirations.
It's unusual to pluralise 'inspiration', although you could in a poetic sense.
I didn't know 'inspiration' is for poetic sense. Then is it currect a right sentence?
- I can gain insights with this journal.
April 24, 2021
The word inspiration itself is not inherently poetic, it’s just usually used in the singular.
‘They are an inspiration to children everywhere.’ ‘I have taken inspiration from all the conversations we had over the years.’
Note how in my examples I’m taking about multiple things (‘they’, ‘conversations’) but still use the singular ‘inspiration’.
You could use ‘inspirations’ but it would have a very poetic feel: ‘We’re all driven by the inspirations in our lives’.
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My planners and journals |
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Since my military service, I have tried to write my planners and journals every day. Since my military service, I have tried to write in my planners and journals every day. Since my military service, I have tried to write in my planners and journals every day. To me 'write my planners' doesn't seem natural. This may be a British English thing though. |
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For reporting my captain , I had to write daily, weekly and monthly planners.
For reporting to my captain |
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At the same time, I started to write my journals when I had a free time.
At the same time, I started to write |
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Now, I have been writing them for 15 years and I have 2 planners and 3 journals. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The planners are works of my job and for my self development.
The planners are for work |
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I transferred them from paper to online tools 5 years ago. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Because I always have my smart phone anytime, it is easy to access the planners by online.
Because I always have my smart phone |
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The journals are also for different purposes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The first journal is about my emotion.
The first journal is |
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It is kind of the cognitive treatments that I can find out why I am mad or sad.
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After writing the diary, I can reduce my stress.
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The second journal is about new experiences. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I do or know new things, I write it more than one sentence.
When I do or |
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Not only cleaning my room, but also quotes from books are topic of the journal. Not only things like cleaning my room, but also quotes from books are topic of the journal. Not only things like cleaning my room, but also quotes from books are topic of the journal. |
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It helps to improve my routines, especially learning English. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The last journal is called 10 years journal. The last journal is called a/my 10 years journal. The last journal is called a/my 10 years journal. |
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(Actually I can't describe this journal clearly. ) |
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Each page of the journal is for the same days in different years.
Each page of the journal is |
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For example, there are journals from 2011 to 2021 on April 23rd page.
For example, there are |
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So I can review my old days what I did on the same day in 2011, what I did on the same day in 2016.
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This journal gives me inspirations.
This journal gives me inspiration It's unusual to pluralise 'inspiration', although you could in a poetic sense. |
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These are all of my planners and journals.
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I highly recommend to write anything every day, and someday it will make it up to you .
I highly recommend 'Make it up' is usually used when talking about something good after doing something bad to someone. 'I'm so sorry I was late, let me buy you a drink to make it up to you.' |
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