Feb. 28, 2021
Thoughts
I feel so tired. Perhaps I’m ill. Perhaps, my shivering body reflects my emotional state.
Yesterday, when I arrived at home she was waiting for me. I wasn’t in my best emotional moment because I had just come home. She came and started to explain how she was feeling about our coexistence at home.
My resolutions:
-Express myself when I need something or when something bothers me.
-Stay in my center. What is important to me and no ignore it.
-Don’t wait until she gives the first step. I could do it.
-It is so difficult living with a friend.
-I don’t have enough energy to guess how she feels or what she wants or what she expects.
-I’m going to prioritize my objectives in my life rather than people who round me are feel comfortable.
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I feel so tired.
Perhaps I’m ill. Perhaps, my shivering body reflects my emotional state.
Yesterday, when I arrived at home she was waiting for me.
I wasn’t in my best emotional moment because I had just coame home.
I wasn’t in my best emotional moment because I just came home.
She came and started to explain how she was feeling about our coexistence at home.
My resolutions:
-Express myself when I need something or when something bothers me.
-Stay in my centered.
-Stay centered.
I'm not sure what you mean here, but if I read it correctly you mean something similar to being stable
WKnow what is important to me and do not ignore it.
Know what is important to me and do not ignore it.
-Don’t wait until shefor her to gives the first step.
-Don’t wait for her to give the first step.
-I don’t have enoughthe energy to guess how she's feels oring, what she wants, or what she expects.
-I don’t have the energy to guess how she's feeling, what she wants, or what she expects.
-I’m going to prioritize my objectives in my life rather than make people who around me are feel comfortable.
-I’m going to prioritize my objectives in life rather than make people around me feel comfortable.
Feedback
I hope you feel better soon! Having a roommate is hard. I hope you have an improved relationship with your roommate.
March 2, 2021
Thank you! I feel better now.
Thoughts
I feel so tired.
Perhaps I’m ill. Perhaps, my shivering body reflects my emotional state.
Perhaps I’m ill. Perhaps my shivering body reflects my emotional state.
No need for a comma there.
Yesterday, when I arrived at home she was waiting for me.
Yesterday, when I arrived home she was waiting for me.
I wasn’t in my best emotional momentstate because I had just come home.
I wasn’t in my best emotional state because I had just come home.
I'm not sure how to correct this, I know my "correction" gives a slightly different meaning but the original just doesn't sound natural somehow.
She came and started to explain how she was feeling about our coexistence at home.
My resolutions:
-Express myself when I need something or when something bothers me.
-Stay in my center.
WAcknowledge what is important to me and do not ignore it.
Acknowledge what is important to me and do not ignore it.
The first part of the sentence needs a verb
-Don’t wait until she givtakes the first step.
-Don’t wait until she takes the first step.
I could do it.
-It is so difficult living with a friend.
-I don’t have enough energy to guess how she feels or what she wants or what she expects.
-I’m going to prioritize my objectives in my life rather than focusing on the people who around me are feelwho keep me in my comfortabl zone.
-I’m going to prioritize my objectives in life rather than focusing on the people around me who keep me in my comfort zone.
I'm not quite sure what you intend to say here, after "life". Do you mean to say you are "too comfortable" in your life because it is easier to be with your friends than to achieve your objectives? To "step out of one's comfort zone" is to challenge oneself.
Feedback
You seem like a pensive person, I feel like you write with soul! You write clearly about complex issues, the corrections are generally minor. Good writing!
Feb. 28, 2021
Thanks! the corrections are really usefull1
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-I’m going to prioritize my objectives in my life rather than people who round me are feel comfortable.
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