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My favorite animes
I want to talk about my favorite anime.
First, I recommend "Neon Genesis Evangelion".
This anime was made in 1995, but very famous in Japanese.
It's a heartwarming anime. Please try to watch.
Second, I recommend "attack on titan".
This anime teach not only heartwarming but also friendship.
However, I also like movies
someday, I want to recommend my favorite movies.
bye
My favorite animes
I want to talk about my favorite anime.
First, I recommend "Neon Genesis Evangelion".
This anime was made in 1995, but and very famous in Japanese.
It's a heartwarming anime.
Please try to watch. it.
Second, I recommend "aAttack on tTitan".
This anime teaches not only heartwarminggenerosity but also friendship.
However, I also like movies
someday, I want to recommend my favorite movies.
bBye
My favorite animes
"anime" is its own plural
This anime was made in 1995, but it's very famous in Japanese.
It's a heartwarming anime.
Language wise this is fine, but heartwarming is maybe not the word I'd choose for Evangelion. Maybe Rebuild of Evangelion, but I think I'd call the original series depressing more than heartwarming!
Please try toand watch it.
Secondly, I recommend "attack on titan".
This anime teachcauses feelings of not onlyjust heartwarming joy but also friendship.
"heartwarming" isn't something you teach. Heartwarming is 心を温まる, I don't think you'd say 心を温まるのを教える in Japanese in either?
It's also an adjective in English, so you need a noun to go with it to match "friendship"
sSomeday, I want to recommend my favorite movies.
bBye
My favorite animes
I want to talk about my favorite anime.
Firstly, I recommend "Neon Genesis Evangelion"."
commas and periods go inside the quotes
I think "First," and "Second," are grammatical but "Firstly," and "Secondly," sound better to me here.
This anime was made in 1995, but it's very famous in Japanese.
It's a heartwarming anime.
Please try to watch it.
Secondly, I recommend "aAttack on tTitan"."
This anime teachis not only heartwarming but also explores the concept of friendship.
However, I also like movies
someday, I want to recommend my favorite movies.
bye
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I have seen both anime. I would not describe Evangelion as "heartwarming" LOL, I find it very depressing. Attack on Titan is also depressing, but it does have heartwarming moments. They are both great though.
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The first letter of titles are usually capitalized. Also, there is no "s" for plural form of anime.
I wantould like to talk about some of my favorite anime.
1. Much more formal and polite.
2. Since you are talking about more than one, you should mention "some of" to indicate this.
Firstly, I recommend "Neon Genesis Evangelion".
This animeIt was made in 1995, butand very famous in Japanese.
Are you talking about Japan the country or Japanese as a language?
It's a heartwarming anime.
Please try to watch.give it a watch as it is quite amazing!
Not wrong, just a small way of improving the sentence
Second, I recommend "aAttack on tTitan".
This anime teachis not only heartwarming but also displays themes of friendship.
However, I also like movies!
someday, I wantSoon, I would like to recommend my favorite movies. as well!
bBye!
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This was a really good attempt! I can see that you are very passionate about the film and entertainment industry. The corrections aren't too much so it shows how well you have really done. Overall great job! Also, as an anime lover, do you enjoy reading manga? :)
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