Feb. 12, 2026
It was 25 of november, my friend and me. We were at the airport, our airplane left since Barcelona. When arrived us, my friend Federico was arrested, because him saved in his backpack a fake gun, but. I talked with a police and I said, He's likes make joke and he was released.
It was 25th of november, my friend and me.
When talking about specific dates, we use 1st, 2nd, 3rd, 4th, 5th, etc. so it is unnatural to see dates without that.
WeMy friend and I were at the airport, o. Our airplane left sincewas going to Barcelona.
We use "since" in terms of time or when we are trying to convey a reason based on a previous experience. Saying "left for Barcelona" implies you are still on the flight since there is no conclusion to the action. Instead, saying "was going to Barcelona" implies the experience is over, but at the time was what was happening.
When we arrived us, my friend Federico was arrested, because him saved in his backpack a fake gun, bute had a fake gun in his backpack.
Use "we" as the subject of the sentence. For example, "we went to Barcelona". Subject is "we", object is Barcelona. We are doing the action. "Us" is used as an object pronoun. For example, "It taught us how to read". In this sentence, we are the subject. The subject is us.
Use "he", not "him" for the same reason. "He" is the subject pronoun, while "him" is the object pronoun.
But I talked with a police and I said, He's"he likes to make jokes" and he was released.
It was 25th of nNovember, my friend and me.I was with my best friend
We were at the airport, our airplane left sincefrom Barcelona.
When we arrived us, my friend Federico was arrested, because him saved in his backpack a fake gun, bute had a fake gun in his backpack.
But then, I talked with athe police and I said, He'sexplained that he likes to make jokes, and he was released.
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Its good overall, I can understand it, its mainly the order of some words and use of commas thats the problem
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My trip to England with my best friend Federico. |
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It was 25 of november, my friend and me. It was 25th of It was 25th of november When talking about specific dates, we use 1st, 2nd, 3rd, 4th, 5th, etc. so it is unnatural to see dates without that. |
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We were at the airport, our airplane left since Barcelona. We were at the airport, our airplane left
We use "since" in terms of time or when we are trying to convey a reason based on a previous experience. Saying "left for Barcelona" implies you are still on the flight since there is no conclusion to the action. Instead, saying "was going to Barcelona" implies the experience is over, but at the time was what was happening. |
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When arrived us, my friend Federico was arrested, because him saved in his backpack a fake gun, but. When we arrived When we arrived Use "we" as the subject of the sentence. For example, "we went to Barcelona". Subject is "we", object is Barcelona. We are doing the action. "Us" is used as an object pronoun. For example, "It taught us how to read". In this sentence, we are the subject. The subject is us. Use "he", not "him" for the same reason. "He" is the subject pronoun, while "him" is the object pronoun. |
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