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Would you travel alone? Why or why not? Give as much detail as possible.
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I dream of traveling alone in a motor home. I hope one day I can drive around the world by myself. But obviously I need time and money to do this; another problem is that how to keep safe may become a big issue. I love nature and I definitely would choose the routes that pass through mountains or forests, but it could be dangerous if I encountered an emergency situation, as it might be hard to call for help.

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I love nature and I definitely would choose the routes that pass through mountains or forests, but it could be dangerous if I encountered an emergency situation, as it might be hard to call for help.

Traveling alone

Traveling aAlone Traveling Alone

I dream of traveling alone in a motor home.

I dream of traveling alone in a motor home. I dream of traveling alone in a motorhome.

I hope one day I can drive around the world by myself.

I hope one day I can drive around the world by myself., I hope one day I can drive around the world by myself,

The original sentence is correct, but I think it makes more sense to connect this sentence with the next one.

But obviously I need time and money to do this;

Bbut obviously I need time and money to do this;. but obviously I need time and money to do this.

The original sentence is correct, but I think it makes more sense to connect this sentence with the previous one.

another problem is that how to keep safe may become a big issue.

aAnother problem is that how to keephow staying safe may become a big issue. Another problem is how staying safe may become a big issue.

I love nature and I definitely would choose the routes that pass through mountains or forests, but it could be dangerous if I encountered an emergency situation, as it might be hard to call for help.

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