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Milano

Dec. 13, 2025

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Bare necessities of life

I think there are 3 pillars , the fundamental things and the base of everything.
And we all know them well, it is enough just to ask yourself directly and give an honest answer from the bottom of your heart.
Those are a couch, a TV and a refrigirator.

And on a desert island nobody will take your cold beer , will occupate your place on a coach and won't be switching channel on TV "to find something more interesting" instead of your "boring" World Football Championship.

Those are , by my humle opinion, the real "bare necessities" of life for any civilized man even on a desert island.

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Dec. 13, 2025

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Bare necessities of life


Bare nNecessities of lLife Bare Necessities of Life

In English, we tend to capitalize all of the letters in a title.

BThe bare necessities of life The bare necessities of life

I think there are 3 pillars , the fundamental things and the base of everything.


I think there are 3three pillars , the fundamental things andthat form the base of everything. I think there are three pillars that form the base of everything.

We tend to use written versions of numbers until we get to larger numbers. I removed some words here to make it more natural.

I think there are "3 pillars , the" in life which are the most fundamental things and the baseis of everything. I think there are "3 pillars" in life which are the most fundamental things and the basis of everything.

Putting "3 pillars" in quotes reads more easily because it makes it clearer that this is your personally chosen metaphor.

And we all know them well, it is enough just to ask yourself directly and give an honest answer from the bottom of your heart.


And we alleven if we know them well, it is enough justgood to ask yourself about them directly and to give an honest answer from the bottom of your heart. And even if we know them well, it is good to ask yourself about them directly and to give an honest answer from the bottom of your heart.

And we all know them well,: it is enough just to ask yourself directly and give an honest answer from the bottom of your heart. And we all know them well: it is enough just to ask yourself directly and give an honest answer from the bottom of your heart.

Those are a couch, a TV and a refrigirator.


Thosey are a couch, a TV, and a refrigierator. They are a couch, a TV, and a refrigerator.

Small spelling error with "refrigerator"

Thosey are a couch, a TV and a refrigierator. They are a couch, a TV and a refrigerator.

And on a desert island nobody will take your cold beer , will occupate your place on a coach and won't be switching channel on TV "to find something more interesting" instead of your "boring" World Football Championship.


And on a desert island nobody will take your cold beer , will occupatey your place on athe coauch and won't be, or switching the channel on TV "to find something more interesting" instead of your "boring" World Football Championship. And on a desert island nobody will take your cold beer, occupy your place on the couch, or switch the channel on TV "to find something more interesting" instead of your "boring" World Football Championship.

Just some changes here with verb tenses and spelling.

And oOn a desert island, nobody will take your cold beer , will occupateor your place on athe coauch, and won't be switching the channel on the TV "to find something more interesting" instead of your "boring" World Football Championship. On a desert island, nobody will take your cold beer or your place on the couch, and won't be switching the channel on the TV "to find something more interesting" instead of your "boring" World Football Championship.

It's not clear how this links to the previous sentence, so "and" doesn't really make sense here. We use "on TV" when we're talking about a television program, but "on the TV" when we're talking about the appliance itself.

Those are , by my humle opinion, the real "bare necessities" of life for any civilized man even on a desert island.


Those are , by my humle opinion, the real "bare necessities" of life, in my humble opinion, for any civilized man, even on a desert island. Those are the real "bare necessities" of life, in my humble opinion, for any civilized man, even on a desert island.

Those are , byin my humble opinion, the real "bare necessities" of life for any civilized man even on a desert island. Those are , in my humble opinion, the real "bare necessities" of life for any civilized man even on a desert island.

If by "man" you mean "adult male person," then that choice is fine here, but if you mean "person" in a more general sense, modern English prefers a gender-neutral term (although you will see "man" used in a gender-neutral way in older texts and some set phrases, it's considered outdated or even sexist to do that now).

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