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受难节和清明节

今天是受难节和清明节。

清明节安康。

我今天发布了一段小视频在油管。这是连接:https://youtube.com/shorts/n4SejnJwilo?si=iugMZEC8FvyOLuLf

如果有什么错误 — 语法啊,口语啊,请您告诉我。

其实我喜欢做手工贺卡,但有一段时间没做。现在我又开始了。

P.S 在一张贺卡上,我想画菱形,但是画了有机结构。我都习惯画有机结构了🤦🏾。Eng translation。


Today is Good Friday and the Qingming Festival.

Wishing you peace and health during the Qingming Festival.

I posted a short video on YouTube today; here is the link: https://youtube.com/shorts/n4SejnJwilo?si=iugMZEC8FvyOLuLf

​If there are any mistakes — in my grammar or speaking — please let me know.

​Actually, I love making handmade cards, but I haven't made any for a while. Now, I’ve started doing it again.

​P.S. I wanted to draw a diamond shape on a card, but I ended up drawing an organic structure instead. I’ve just become so used to drawing organic structures! 🤦🏾

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受难节和清明节

这是连接:https://youtube.com/shorts/n4SejnJwilo?si=iugMZEC8FvyOLuLf

如果有什么错误 — 语法啊,口语啊,请您告诉我。

我都习惯画有机结构了🤦🏾。

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Toluwani

yesterday

216

受难节和清明节

清明节安康。

我今天发布了一段小视频在油管。

如果有什么错误 — 语法啊,口语啊,请您告诉我。

其实我喜欢做手工贺卡,但有一段时间没做。

现在我又开始了。

P.S 在一张贺卡上,我想画菱形,但是画了有机结构。

Eng translation。

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我都习惯画有机结构了🤦🏾。

It seems that you are learning chemistry in college.

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yesterday

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受难节和清明节

今天是受难节和清明节。

清明节安康。

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Toluwani

yesterday

216

受难节和清明节

今天是受难节和清明节。

清明节安康。

这是连接:https://youtube.com/shorts/n4SejnJwilo?si=iugMZEC8FvyOLuLf

现在我又开始了。

我都习惯画有机结构了🤦🏾。

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受难节和清明节


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今天是受难节和清明节。


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今天是受难节和清明节。 今天是受难节和清明节。

今天是受难节,又是清明节。 今天是受难节,又是清明节。

清明节安康。


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我今天发布了一段小视频在油管。


今天我在油管发布了一段小视频在油管 今天我在油管发布了一段小视频

今天我在油管发布了一段小视频在油管 今天我在油管发布了一段小视频

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我今天发布了一段小视频油管。 我今天发布了一段小视频油管。

这是连接:https://youtube.com/shorts/n4SejnJwilo?si=iugMZEC8FvyOLuLf


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这是连接:https://youtube.com/shorts/n4SejnJwilo?si=iugMZEC8FvyOLuLf 这是连接:https://youtube.com/shorts/n4SejnJwilo?si=iugMZEC8FvyOLuLf

It's a pity that logging in to youtube is hard for me, we have to use some apps...

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如果有什么错误 — 语法啊,口语啊,——在语法和口语的层面上——请您告诉我。 如果有什么错误——在语法和口语的层面上——请您告诉我。

“——”这个标点符号有几个常见用法,可能有些困难,不过我第一次见到有中文学习者用这个符号,忍不住多说几句,请见谅。 1.表示声音的延长。比如:我在山顶上大喊:“喂——听得见吗——” 2.表示解释、补充、说明,也就是您的这个用法。需要注意的是,如果是在句子中间补充说明的,则前后都需要使用“——”。比如: *一个男人走了过来——他穿着红色的衬衫,戴着白色的针织帽。 *一个男人——穿着红色的衬衫且带着白色的针织帽——走了过来。 3.表示语句意义的转折。比如:我真的无法接受狗狗——才怪!开玩笑的,我可是一个坚定的狗派。

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其实我喜欢做手工贺卡,但有一段时间没做。


其实我喜欢做手工贺卡,但已经有一段时间没做 其实我喜欢做手工贺卡,但已经有一段时间没做

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其实我喜欢做手工贺卡,但有一段时间没做 其实我喜欢做手工贺卡,但有一段时间没做

现在我又开始了。


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现在我又开始了。 现在我又开始了。

P.S 在一张贺卡上,我想画菱形,但是画了有机结构。


P.S 在另外:有一张贺卡,我想画菱形,但是画了在上面画一个菱形,但最后我画了一个有机结构。 另外:有一张贺卡,我想在上面画一个菱形,但最后我画了一个有机结构。

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P.S 在张贺卡上,我原本想画菱形,但是最后画了有机结构。 P.S 在张贺卡上,我原本想画菱形,但是最后画了有机结构。

我都习惯画有机结构了🤦🏾。


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我都习惯画有机结构了🤦🏾。 我都习惯画有机结构了🤦🏾。

It seems that you are learning chemistry in college.

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