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Today's Schedule (The First day)

Today is the first day I relearn English.
I consulted ChatGPT for my English learning program—speaking, writing and listening—in advance, so I could build my schedule perfectly.
Thank you my Chappy!

From 11:30 am to 12:30 am, I have a writing practice by journaling.
The Scheme of my journal given by Chappy is “Today’s Schedule”. . . Yes right here, right now!

From 02:30 pm to 03:30 pm, I will have a listening practice.
I will listen to the radio program “BBC Learning English” for shadowing practice.
I have never done shadowing practice before, but I will try it anyway.

From 06:30 pm to 07:00 pm, I will take a practice for speaking.
I’m not good at speaking in English especially. I get white out in my head when someone talks to me.
But I will try to have English practice everyday!

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Today's Schedule (The First day)

Today is the first day I relearn English.

I consulted ChatGPT for my English learning program—speaking, writing and listening—in advance, so I could build my schedule perfectly.

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I will listen to the radio program “BBC Learning English” for shadowing practice.

I have never done shadowing practice before, but I will try it anyway.

But I will try to have English practice everyday!

The Scheme of my journal given by Chappy is “Today’s Schedule”.

Today is the first day I relearn English.

I consulted ChatGPT for my English learning program—speaking, writing and listening—in advance, so I could build my schedule perfectly.

Thank you my Chappy!

I will listen to the radio program “BBC Learning English” for shadowing practice.

I have never done shadowing practice before, but I will try it anyway.

I’m not good at speaking in English especially.

But I will try to have English practice everyday!

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While both ". . ." and "..." are fine depending on the style guide you follow, this site will interpret ". . ." to be three separate sentences. For this reason, I'd suggest using "..." instead, at least when writing on LangCorrect.

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Today's Schedule (The First day)


Today's Schedule (The First dDay) Today's Schedule (The First Day)

Today's Schedule (The First day) Today's Schedule (The First day)

Can also say "Today's Schedule (Day 1)" and then tomorrow would be (Day 2)...and so on

Today's Schedule (The First dDay) Today's Schedule (The First Day)

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Today is the first day I relearn English.


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Today is the first day I relearnturn to studying English. Today is the first day I return to studying English.

"relearn" sounds unnatural. If it's your first time studying English, then we would say "Today is the first day I am studying English. " But since you already know some English, "relearn" makes me feel like you have forgotten everything. And based on your writing skills, this isn't true. ;)

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Today is the first day I relearn English. Today is the first day I relearn English.

Today I will restart my English language learning journey - sounds better, but people will understand what you said. It just sounds a bit odd, I can;t pinpoint why.

I consulted ChatGPT for my English learning program—speaking, writing and listening—in advance, so I could build my schedule perfectly.


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I consulted ChatGPT for my English learning program in advance. This way I could build my speaking, writing, and listening—in advance, so I could build my schedules perfectroperly. I consulted ChatGPT for my English learning program in advance. This way I could build my speaking, writing, and listening schedules properly.

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Thank you my Chappy!


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Thank you, my Chappy! Thank you, my Chappy!

I assume Chappy is a term of endearment to the program of ChatGPT

From 11:30 am to 12:30 am, I have a writing practice by journaling.


From 11:30 am to 12:30 am, I have a writing practice by journaling. From 11:30 am to 12:30 am, I have writing practice by journaling.

(1) "A writing practice" isn't necessarily wrong. However, in this context, "practice" is generally an uncountable noun; it certainly sounds more natural this way. The same applies for all further instances of "practice" in this writing. (2) Alternatively, and perhaps more naturally: "I practice writing by journaling."

From 11:30 am tountil 12:30 am, I have ajournal writing practice by journaling. From 11:30 am until 12:30 am, I have journal writing practice.

From 11:30 am to 12:30 am, I have a writing practice writing by journaling. From 11:30 am to 12:30 am, I practice writing by journaling.

From 11:30 am to 12:30 apm, I have a writingwill journal to practice bmy journalingwriting skills. From 11:30 am to 12:30 pm, I will journal to practice my writing skills.

Skills does not need to be included but I rewrote it to sounds more natural.

The Scheme of my journal given by Chappy is “Today’s Schedule”.


The Schemesubject of my journal given by Chappy is “Today’s Schedule”. The subject of my journal given by Chappy is “Today’s Schedule”.

(1) "Scheme" refers to the structure of the text, which "Today's Schedule" is not. Rather, it is a subject or title. (2) Regardless of the word you use, it should not be capitalised.

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The Scheme of my journal given by Chappy is “Today’s Schedule”. The Scheme of my journal given by Chappy is “Today’s Schedule”.

I don't know what you're trying to say here...

Yes right here, right now!


Yes, right here, right now! Yes, right here, right now!

A comma break to separate "yes" and "right here" will be much more natural.

Yes, right here, right now! Yes, right here, right now!

From 02:30 pm to 03:30 pm, I will have a listening practice.


From 02:30 pm to 03:30 pm, I will have a listening practice. From 02:30 pm to 03:30 pm, I will have listening practice.

Again, this sounds much more natural.

From 02:30 pm tountil 03:30 pm, I will have a listening practice. From 02:30 pm until 03:30 pm, I have listening practice.

or "..., I will have listening practice." ( no "a" ) or "..., I will have a listening session." ( needs the "a" )

From 02:30 pm to 03:30 pm, I will have ado some listening practice. From 02:30 pm to 03:30 pm, I will do some listening practice.

From 02:30 pm to 03:30 pm, I will have a listening practice. From 02:30 pm to 03:30 pm, I will have listening practice.

This flows better with the way you have written other sentences.

I will listen to the radio program “BBC Learning English” for shadowing practice.


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I will listen to thea radio program called “BBC Learning English” for shadowing practice. I will listen to a radio program called “BBC Learning English” for shadowing practice.

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I have never done shadowing practice before, but I will try it anyway.


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I have never done shadowing practice before, but I will trygive it anyway. try. I have never done shadowing practice before, but I will give it a try.

This sentence is fine but can also say ".... before, but I will give it a try."

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From 06:30 pm to 07:00 pm, I will take a practice for speaking.


From 06:30 pm to 07:00 pm, I will take ahave practice for speaking. From 06:30 pm to 07:00 pm, I will have practice speaking.

"Take a practice" might refer to something like a test, such as in the phrase"I took a math practice (paper)," which is probably not what you meant here.

From 06:30 pm tountil 07:00 pm, I will take a practice for speaking. From 06:30 pm until 07:00 pm, I will practice speaking.

If you want to say you are taking a speaking / conversation (online/classroom) lesson then, "... I will have a speaking lesson." or "... I will have speaking practice."

From 06:30 pm to 07:00 pm, I will take a practice for speaking. From 06:30 pm to 07:00 pm, I will practice speaking.

From 06:30 pm to 07:00 pm, I will take a practice for speaking. From 06:30 pm to 07:00 pm, I will practice speaking.

I’m not good at speaking in English especially.


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I’m not especially good at speaking in English especially. I’m not especially good at speaking English.

I’m especially not good at speaking in English especially. I’m especially not good at speaking English.

I’m especially not good at speaking in English especially. I’m especially not good at speaking in English.

I get white out in my head when someone talks to me.


I get white out in my headMy mind goes blank when someone talks to me. My mind goes blank when someone talks to me.

"(Mind) go blank" is the expression you're looking for here. "White out" refers to the impairment of vision due to a sudden bright light or losing consciousness.

I get white out in my headMy mind goes blank when someone talspeaks to me. in English. My mind goes blank when someone speaks to me in English.

This happened so many times when I traveled in rural Japan, everyone panics until they found out I could speak some Japanese. Don't panic.... you can do it!! Rewrote this for a more natural sentence. (US English)

I get white outo blank in my head when someone talks to me. I go blank in my head when someone talks to me.

a more common phrase would be "I draw a blank", so "I draw a blank when someone talks to me"

I get white out in my headMy head goes blank when someone talks to me. My head goes blank when someone talks to me.

This is the expression you are looking for when you have nothing in your brain/head.

But I will try to have English practice everyday!


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But I will try to havpractice English practice everyday! I will try to practice English everyday!

Even better : "I will practice English everyday!"

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ButHowever, I will try to have English practice everyday! However, I will try to have English practice everyday!

We don't use but to start a sentence usually. Also you can say - I will try practice my English everyday to sound more native.

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