The library is closes everyd on Mondays. The library is closed on Mondays.

As a result, I used today to deal with some stuffs. As a result, I used today to deal with some stuffs

As a result, I used today to deal with some stuffs. As a result, I used today to deal with some stuff.

As a resultTherefore, I used today to deal with some stuffs. Therefore, I used today to deal with some stuff.

Or 'deal with some things' (I think that would be my first instinct to use!)

As a result, I used today to deal with some stuffs. As a result, I used today to deal with some stuff.

"Stuff" is considered an uncountable noun so the plural is still "stuff."

First, I went to the supermarket to buying some food. First, I went to the supermarket to buy some food.

First, I went to the supermarket to buying some food. First, I went to the supermarket to buy some food.

First, I went to the supermarket to buying some food. First, I went to the supermarket to buy food.

'some' isn't wrong, but you already used it in the previous sentence, so I think things sound better if it's removed here.

First, I went to the supermarket to buying some food. First, I went to the supermarket to buy some food.

Second, I had mygot a hair cut. Second, I got a haircut.

Second, I had my hair cut.; Second, I had my hair cut;

Connect to the next part using a semicolon

It iit's more convenient to shampoo it now.! it's more convenient to shampoo it now!

I would say 'easier' instead of 'more convenient', although that's fine too.

I keep a diary before I go to bed, but sadly I was locked out due to the low correct ratio. I keep a diary before I go to bed, but sadly I was locked out due to the low correct ratio.

I keep a diary before I go to bed, but sadly I was [locked out | blocked] due to themy low correction ratio. I keep a diary before I go to bed, but sadly I was [locked out | blocked] due to my low correction ratio.

I keep a diausually write my diary entry before I go to bed, but sadly I was locked due to theout today because of my low correction ratio. I usually write my diary entry before I go to bed, but sadly I was locked out today because of my low correction ratio.

If you can replace 'due to' with 'caused by', then it's fine. If you can't, then use 'because of'. In this example, 'I was locked out today caused by my low correction ratio' doesn't make sense, so it should be 'I was locked out today because of my low correction ratio'

I keep a diary before I go to bed, but sadly I was locked out due to thea low correction ratio. I keep a diary before I go to bed, but sadly I was locked out due to a low correction ratio.

I spent time correcting the journal entries in Chinese, and I corrected half of them now. I spent time correcting journal entries in Chinese, and I corrected half of them now.

I spent some time correcting the journals written in Chinese, and I corrected've now done about half of them now. I spent some time correcting the journals written in Chinese, and I've now done about half of them.

Wow, speedy work!

I spent time correcting the journals in Chinese, and I so I have corrected half of them now. I spent time correcting the journals in Chinese so I have corrected half of them now.

I'm kind of afraid that the corrections I made are much less than Ia bit worried that I've made fewer corrections than what I will received, because there are not many journals in Chinese and I write every day. I'm a bit worried that I've made fewer corrections than what I will receive, because there are not many journals in Chinese and I write every day.

I think 'worried' is a better choice here than 'afraid' or 'scared'. I also hope I've understood your problem here correctly!

It will cause the ratio becoming too low and makinge me unable to write for a long time. It will cause the ratio becoming too low and make me unable to write for a long time.

It will cause the ratio to becominge too low and makinge me unable to write for a long time. It will cause the ratio to become too low and make me unable to write for a long time.

It will cause thef so, my ratio will becominge too low and making me unable to write for a long timI'll be locked out and unable to write again for a while. If so, my ratio will become too low and I'll be locked out and unable to write again for a while.

I think it makes sense to refer again to being locked out. (I hope this doesn't happen to you though!)

It will cause the ratio to becominge too low and making me unable to write for a long time. It will cause the ratio to become too low making me unable to write for a long time.

Today I went to the library today. I went to the library today.

There were a lots of students, because General Scholastic Ability Test is just on this Friday! There were a lots of students, because General Scholastic Ability Test is on this Friday!

There were a lots of students, because the General Scholastic Ability Test is (just) on this Friday! There were a lots of students, because the General Scholastic Ability Test is (just) on this Friday!

“Just” sounds unnatural here.

There were a lots of students, because the General Scholastic Ability Test is just on this Friday! There were a lot of students because the General Scholastic Ability Test is this Friday!

Your options are 'there were a lot of' or 'there were lots of'.

There were a lots of students, because the General Scholastic Ability Test is just on this Friday! There were lots of students, because the General Scholastic Ability Test is this Friday!

They[Seeing them | Their presence] reminded me that I also studied sovery hard before the exam. [Seeing them | Their presence] reminded me that I also studied very hard before the exam.

TSeeing theym reminded me that I also studied so hard before theat exam. – Seeing them reminded me that I also studied so hard before that exam –

They reminded me thathow I also studied so hard before the exam. They reminded me how I also studied so hard before the exam.

Ggoing to the library had been my routine during that time.! going to the library had been my routine!

Connected to previous part now with an en rule :)

Now, I still need to go to the library every day, but I have another purpose. Now, I still need to go to the library every day, but I have another purpose.

NowThese days, I still need to go to the library every day, but I have another purpose now. These days, I still need to go to the library every day, but I have another purpose now.

Now, I still need to go to the library every day, but I have another purpose. Now, I still need to go to the library every day, but I have another purpose.

The same part between them is I work hard for my future. The same part between them is I work hard for my future.

I wasn't sure how to correct this.

ThWe same part between them is Ihare a common goal: we’re all working hard for myour future.s. We share a common goal: we’re all working hard for our futures.

The same part between them is IAs before, I'm continuing to work hard for my future. As before, I'm continuing to work hard for my future.

The same partimilarity between them is that I work hard for my future. The similarity between them is that I work hard for my future.