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My city
My city is Shizuoka. Shizuoka is near Mt.Fuji and sea.
Famous products are green tea, seafood, ｍusical instruments and more.
私の住む街は静岡です。静岡は富士山と海に近い場所にあります。
名産品は緑茶、海産物、楽器などです。
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MyThe city isI live in is called Shizuoka.
The city I live in is called Shizuoka.
"My city" is ok as a title, but it's a little too non-specific in a sentence. It's better to clearer if it's a city you live in, a city you consider your hometown, a city you're e.g. a mayor or council member for.
Shizuoka is near Mt.Fuji and the sea. Shizuoka is near Mt.Fuji and the sea.
FIts famous products are green tea, seafood, ｍusical instruments and moreothers.
Its famous products are green tea, seafood, ｍusical instruments and others.
"more" is used for counts rather than lists.
My city
My city is Shizuoka.
Shizuoka is near Mt.Fuji and the sea. Shizuoka is near Mt.Fuji and the sea.
FSome famous products from my city are green tea, seafood, and ｍusical instruments and more.
Some famous products from my city are green tea, seafood, and ｍusical instruments.
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My City
My city is Shizuoka.
Shizuoka is near Mt. Fuji and the sea. Shizuoka is near Mt. Fuji and the sea.
Famous products areIt's famous for green tea, seafood, ｍusical instruments and more.
It's famous for green tea, seafood, ｍusical instruments and more.
Saying "famous products" alone doesn't make sense, you need to include what you're talking about.
My city is called Shizuoka. My city is called Shizuoka.
Shizuoka is near Mt. Fuji and the sea. Shizuoka is near Mt. Fuji and the sea.
FSome famous products arinclude green tea, seafood, ｍand musical instruments and more.
Some famous products include green tea, seafood, and musical instruments.
you could say 'well known' instead of famous
Since you're describing well known products I would be more specific like seafood = lobster or musical instruments = pianos
And more isn't needed here because we know it's not an exhaustive (complete) list
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My city is Shizuoka. My city is called Shizuoka. My city is called Shizuoka. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect!
"My city" is ok as a title, but it's a little too non-specific in a sentence. It's better to clearer if it's a city you live in, a city you consider your hometown, a city you're e.g. a mayor or council member for. |
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Shizuoka is near Mt.Fuji and sea. Shizuoka is near Mt. Fuji and the sea. Shizuoka is near Mt. Fuji and the sea. Shizuoka is near Mt. Fuji and the sea. Shizuoka is near Mt. Fuji and the sea. Shizuoka is near Mt.Fuji and the sea. Shizuoka is near Mt.Fuji and the sea. Shizuoka is near Mt.Fuji and the sea. Shizuoka is near Mt.Fuji and the sea. |
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Famous products are green tea, seafood, ｍusical instruments and more.
you could say 'well known' instead of famous Since you're describing well known products I would be more specific like seafood = lobster or musical instruments = pianos And more isn't needed here because we know it's not an exhaustive (complete) list
Saying "famous products" alone doesn't make sense, you need to include what you're talking about.
"more" is used for counts rather than lists. |
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