Jan. 22, 2021
My niece's visit (note: only fictional)
When I received the news that my niece Kathy would visit me, I jumped for joy. She is such a chipper girl and totally takes after her mother. Her plane was scheduled to get in on Friday, 7.30pm, but I already braced myself for a unconcentrated week at work on Monday because I could not wait to see her again. I went ballistic when I got an update on Thursday that her flight got cancelled due to Covid and that she would not be able to visit me.
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My Niece's Visit (Note: Only Fictional)
In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjetives, adverbs, pronouns, etc., must be capitalized.
When I received the news that my niece Kathy would visit me, I jumped for joy.
She is such a chipperjoyful (?) girl and totally takes after her mother.
She is such a joyful (?) girl and totally takes after her mother.
I've never heard "chipper" used in this context.
Her plane was scheduled to get in on Friday, 7.30pm, but I'd already braced myself for a unconcenweek of being distracted week at work on Monday, because I could not wait to see her again.
Her plane was scheduled to get in on Friday, 7.30pm, but I'd already braced myself for a week of being distracted at work, because I could not wait to see her again.
"Could not" is often written/said as "couldn't".
I went ballistic when I got an update on Thursday that said her flight got cancelled due to Covid and that she would not be able to visit me. I went ballistic when I got an update on Thursday that said her flight got cancelled due to Covid and that she would not be able to visit me.
"Would not" is often written/said as "wouldn't".
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My niece's visit (note: only fictional)
My In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjetives, adverbs, pronouns, etc., must be capitalized. |
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When I received the news that my niece Kathy would visit me, I jumped for joy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She is such a chipper girl and totally takes after her mother.
She is such a I've never heard "chipper" used in this context. |
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Her plane was scheduled to get in on Friday, 7.30pm, but I already braced myself for a unconcentrated week at work on Monday because I could not wait to see her again.
Her plane was scheduled to get in on Friday, 7.30pm, but I'd already braced myself for a "Could not" is often written/said as "couldn't". |
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I went ballistic when I got an update on Thursday that her flight got cancelled due to Covid and that she would not be able to visit me. I went ballistic when I got an update on Thursday that said her flight got cancelled due to Covid and that she would not be able to visit me. I went ballistic when I got an update on Thursday that said her flight got cancelled due to Covid and that she would not be able to visit me. "Would not" is often written/said as "wouldn't". |
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