Sept. 10, 2022
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Nota: please do not recommend stylistic unless it is seriously uninterpretable, or correct my commas, this is my style! My sole focus is perfecting my grammar, thank you kindly :)
Write an email to your friend inviting her to your birthday party.
Fecha: 9 de abril
Para: a, mailto: <[email protected]>
De: fran, mailto: <[email protected]>
Asunto: ¿Vas a mi cumpleaños de número 18?
Hola Ally:
Espero que te vaya bien. Este sábado voy a tener la fiesta de cumpleaños y me encantaría invitarte. ¿Estarás libre? Si verdad, por favor no te preocupes con darme un regalo. Hace casi diez años desde nos conocemos. ¡Será un día fenomenal! Podrías traer tu hermanita, si tendrás que hacerle de canguro.
Hasta al colegio
Tu mejor amiga
Fran.
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Fecha: 9 de abril
Para: a, mailto: <[email protected]> Para: a, mailto: <[email protected]>
De: fran, mailto: <[email protected]> De: fran, mailto: <[email protected]>
Asunto: ¿Vvas a mi cumpleaños de número 18?
Asunto: ¿vas a mi cumpleaños número 18?
Espero que te vaya bien.
Este sábado voy a tener la fiesta de cumpleaños y me encantaría invitarte.
¿Estarás libre?
SiDe verdad, por favor no te preocupes conpor/de darme un regalo por favor.
De verdad, no te preocupes por/de darme un regalo por favor.
Hace casi diez años desdque nos conocemos.
Hace casi diez años que nos conocemos.
¡Será un día fenomenal!
Podrías traer a tu hermanita, si tendráuvieras que hacerle de canguro.
Podrías traer a tu hermanita, si tuvieras que hacerle de canguro.
I'm not sure what you mean by "hacerle de canguro." Maybe "cuidarla." I don't know. Either way, the rest of your sentence is okay.
Hasta al colegio Hasta al colegio
Makes sense on its own. I think you wanted to say something like, "Nos vemos en el colegio," though.
Sept. 12, 2022
SiDe verdad, por favor no te preocupes conpor/de darme un regalo por favor.
If it is true -> de verdad
Please don’t worry worry about giving me a present -> no Te preocupes por/de darme un regalo por favor
Sept. 12, 2022
Hace casi diez años desdque nos conocemos.
It is been almost 10 year since we’ve met -> have casi diez años que nos conocemos
Sept. 12, 2022
Podrías traer a tu hermanita, si tendráuvieras que hacerle de canguro.
I'm not sure what you mean by "hacerle de canguro." Maybe "cuidarla." I don't know. Either way, the rest of your sentence is okay.
Baby sitting her
Sept. 12, 2022
Podrías traer a tu hermanita, si tendráuvieras que hacerle de canguro.
I'm not sure what you mean by "hacerle de canguro." Maybe "cuidarla." I don't know. Either way, the rest of your sentence is okay.
You could bring your sister -> podrías traer a tu hermanita
Sept. 12, 2022
Podrías traer a tu hermanita, si tendráuvieras que hacerle de canguro.
I'm not sure what you mean by "hacerle de canguro." Maybe "cuidarla." I don't know. Either way, the rest of your sentence is okay.
If you have to babysit her -> si tuvieras que hacerle de canguro. Ahhh it is a hypothetical situation therefore I use the -viera tense thanks
Sept. 12, 2022
Hasta al colegio
Makes sense on its own. I think you wanted to say something like, "Nos vemos en el colegio," though.
I want to say “see you at school” which is yeah very colloquial in English, so the colloquial version is “nos vemos en el colegio” ?
Sept. 12, 2022
I want to say “see you at school” which is yeah very colloquial in English, so the colloquial version is “nos vemos en el colegio” ?
Yes, it is. You could also say, "Nos vemos en el cole/la uni." ("el cole = el colegio," "la uni" = la universidad." They both sound very common to me. I see. Then you could also say "cuidarla" if it's about babysitting someone. I hope that helps, and no problem.
Sept. 12, 2022
Yes, it is. You could also say, "Nos vemos en el cole/la uni." ("el cole = el colegio," "la uni" = la universidad." They both sound very common to me. I see. Then you could also say "cuidarla" if it's about babysitting someone. I hope that helps, and no problem.
El cole - the colegio (slang), la uni - the university (slang).
Podrías traer tu hermanita si tendrás que cuidarla - you could bring your little sister if you have to baby sit her. Thank you!!
Sept. 12, 2022
The other option is just "nos vemos en la u" when it comes to the university. You also say: "te veo en el cole/la uni/la u" rather than "nos vemos en..." Both sound pretty common. You're welcome!
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Nota: please do not recommend stylistic unless it is seriously uninterpretable, or correct my commas, this is my style! |
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My sole focus is perfecting my grammar, thank you kindly :) |
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Write an email to your friend inviting her to your birthday party. |
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Para: a, mailto: <[email protected]> Para: a, mailto: <[email protected]> Para: a, mailto: <[email protected]> |
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De: fran, mailto: <[email protected]> De: fran, mailto: <[email protected]> De: fran, mailto: <[email protected]> |
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Asunto: ¿Vas a mi cumpleaños de número 18?
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Este sábado voy a tener la fiesta de cumpleaños y me encantaría invitarte. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Si verdad, por favor no te preocupes con darme un regalo.
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Hace casi diez años desde nos conocemos.
Hace casi diez años |
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¡Será un día fenomenal! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Podrías traer tu hermanita, si tendrás que hacerle de canguro.
Podrías traer a tu hermanita, si t I'm not sure what you mean by "hacerle de canguro." Maybe "cuidarla." I don't know. Either way, the rest of your sentence is okay. |
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Hasta al colegio Hasta al colegio Hasta al colegio Makes sense on its own. I think you wanted to say something like, "Nos vemos en el colegio," though. |
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Tu mejor amiga |
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