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Kanato

Jan. 24, 2026

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January 24th

I visited some Kimono rental shops today to prepare for my graduation celebration.
Actually, I graduated from the university about two years ago, but I missed a chance to take a photo wearing a Kimono at the time.
In Japan, especially for females, it is common to wear Kimono for celebrations like the coming-of-age ceremony or graduation.
It's so exciting to choose a favorite.
Unfortunately, I didn't find one I liked today, so I might visit another shop next time. I hope I can make time.

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I visited some Kkimono rental shops today to prepare for my graduation celebration.

Actually, I graduated from the university about two years ago, but I missed a chance to take a photo wearing a Kkimono at the time.

"From the" is used when something has been mentioned prior.

In Japan, especially for females, it is common to wear K[a] kimono for celebrations like the coming-of-age ceremony or graduation.

It's so exciting to choose a favorite.

Unfortunately, I didn't find one I liked today, so I might visit another shop next time.

I hope I can make time.

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Good job! I'm hoping that you'll pick out the perfect kimono for you!

Actually, I graduated from the university about two years ago, but I missed a chance to take a photo wearing a Kkimono at the time.

kimono is a category (as opposed to a brand or something) so doesn't take a capital letter

In Japan, especially for females, it is common to wear Kkimonos for celebrations like the coming-of-age ceremonyies or graduations.

kimono's plural form in English is kimonos. While Japanese does not have plural forms, Japanese loan words in English do.

January 24th

I visited some Kimono rental shops today to prepare for my graduation celebration.

Actually, I graduated from the university about two years ago, but I missed a chance to take a photo wearing a Kimono at the time.

In Japan, especially for females, it is common to wear a Kimono for celebrations like the coming-of-age ceremony or graduation.

It's so exciting to choose a favourite.

Unfortunately, I didn't find one I liked today, so I might visit another shop next time.

I hope I can make time.

January 24th

I visited some Kimono rental shops today to prepare for my graduation celebration.

Actually, I graduated from the university about two years ago, but I missed athe chance to take a photo wearing a Kimono at the time.

In Japan, especially for females, it is common to wear a Kimono for celebrations like the coming-of-age ceremony or graduation.

It's so exciting to choose ayour favorite one.

Unfortunately, I didn't find the one I liked today, so I might visit another shop next time.

I hope I can make it this time.

January 24th


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I visited some Kimono rental shops today to prepare for my graduation celebration.


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I visited some Kkimono rental shops today to prepare for my graduation celebration.

Actually, I graduated from the university about two years ago, but I missed a chance to take a photo wearing a Kimono at the time.


Actually, I graduated from the university about two years ago, but I missed athe chance to take a photo wearing a Kimono at the time.

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Actually, I graduated from the university about two years ago, but I missed a chance to take a photo wearing a Kkimono at the time.

kimono is a category (as opposed to a brand or something) so doesn't take a capital letter

Actually, I graduated from the university about two years ago, but I missed a chance to take a photo wearing a Kkimono at the time.

"From the" is used when something has been mentioned prior.

It's so exciting to choose a favorite.


It's so exciting to choose ayour favorite one.

It's so exciting to choose a favourite.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In Japan, especially for females, it is common to wear Kimono for celebrations like the coming-of-age ceremony or graduation.


In Japan, especially for females, it is common to wear a Kimono for celebrations like the coming-of-age ceremony or graduation.

In Japan, especially for females, it is common to wear a Kimono for celebrations like the coming-of-age ceremony or graduation.

In Japan, especially for females, it is common to wear Kkimonos for celebrations like the coming-of-age ceremonyies or graduations.

kimono's plural form in English is kimonos. While Japanese does not have plural forms, Japanese loan words in English do.

In Japan, especially for females, it is common to wear K[a] kimono for celebrations like the coming-of-age ceremony or graduation.

Unfortunately, I didn't find one I liked today, so I might visit another shop next time.


Unfortunately, I didn't find the one I liked today, so I might visit another shop next time.

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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I hope I can make time.


I hope I can make it this time.

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