Jan. 1, 2021
A family I like
Today, I am going to talk about a family I like. It is my close friend’s family. She is from a respectable family. Several months ago, they bought a new condominium in Beijing with carving furniture and cherry ground. They invited me to their new apartment. They hosted me hospitality with elegant food. It was the first time I met her families, but I can tell they are well-educated through their speech and behaviour. Her father is the CEO of a big company. He is really talkative and sociable. He seemed to know everything, because every time we try to strike up a conversation he can always easily get into conversation with us and get to the point. Her mother is a teacher and she is also well-informed. I really like this loving family. It is the one I am always looking forward to living in.
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A family I like
Today, I am going to talk about a family I like.
It is my close friend’s family.
She is from a respectable family.
Several months ago, they bought a new condominiumapartment in Beijing with carvinged furniture and cherry ground.
Several months ago, they bought a new apartment in Beijing with carved furniture.
"condominium" is correct, but most people just say "condo" or "apartment". (You later use "apartment" so it's best to be consistent.)
They invited me to their new apartment.
They hosted mwere hospitality with elegant foodble and provided an elaborate meal.
They were hospitable and provided an elaborate meal.
It's "hospitably" not "hospitality", but it would be weird to say that. "elegant" isn't a great adjective for "food".
It was the first time I met her familiesy, but I can tell they are well-educated throughby their speech and behaviour.
It was the first time I met her family, but I can tell they are well-educated by their speech and behaviour.
"through their" is correct, but a bit formal.
Her father is the CEO of a big company.
He is really talkative and sociable.
He seemeds to know everything, because every time we try to strike up a conversation he can always easily get into conversation with us and get to the pointengage with us and understands the topic.
He seems to know everything, because every time we strike up a conversation he can always easily engage with us and understands the topic.
Her mother is a teacher and she is also well-informed.
It is the one I am always looking forward to living invisiting this family.
I always look forward to visiting this family.
Jan. 1, 2021
thank you~
A family I like
Today, I am going to talk about a family I like.
It is my close friend’s family.
She is from a respectable family.
Several months ago, they bought a new condominium in Beijing with carving wooden furniture and cherry ground.
Several months ago, they bought a new condominium in Beijing with wooden furniture.
Not really sure what you were saying here, sorry, so I put in something that makes sense!
They invited me to their new apartment.
They hosted me hospitality with elegant foodand cooked wonderful food for me.
They hosted me and cooked wonderful food for me.
Hospitality is not an adverb
It was the first time I met her familiey members, but I can tell they are well-educated through their speech and behaviour.
It was the first time I met her family members, but I can tell they are well-educated through their speech and behaviour.
Her father is the CEO of a big company.
He is really talkative and sociable.
He seemed to know everything, because every time we try to strike up a conversation he can always easily get into conversation with us and get to the point.
Her mother is a teacher and she is also well-informed.
I really like this loving family.
It is the one I am always looking forward to living invisiting.
It is the one I always look forward to visiting.
Jan. 1, 2021
Thank you~
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Several months ago, they bought a new condominium in Beijing with carving furniture and cherry ground.
Several months ago, they bought a new condominium in Beijing with Not really sure what you were saying here, sorry, so I put in something that makes sense!
Several months ago, they bought a new "condominium" is correct, but most people just say "condo" or "apartment". (You later use "apartment" so it's best to be consistent.) |
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They hosted me hospitality with elegant food.
They hosted me Hospitality is not an adverb
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It was the first time I met her families, but I can tell they are well-educated through their speech and behaviour.
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