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Sparkling Water Instead of Alcohol アルコールより炭酸水

I don’t drink much alcohol. I think people who do enjoy it either for the taste, the relaxed feeling it gives them, or the socializing that comes with drinking with friends. But I rarely go out in the evening to see friends, and alcohol just makes me sleepy. So I don’t really see any benefits in drinking it.

Instead, I’ve made a habit of drinking sparkling water. I like it because it’s cheaper, lower in calories, and refreshing. Having a glass of sparkling water with lots of ice, especially on a hot summer day or right after a bath, is probably my favorite moment of the day. I consider it a fairly healthy habit, though the plastic waste from 500 ml bottles is the downside. At one point, I was drinking three to four bottles a day, but now I’m trying to cut it down to one bottle a day, or even one every two days.


私はアルコールをあまり飲まない。アルコールが好きな人はその味や、リラックスした気分になれること、友人との交流などを目的にお酒を飲むのだと思うけれど、私は夜に外出して友だちに会うことはほとんどないし、アルコールを飲んでも眠くなるだけなので、アルコールを飲むメリットはほとんどない。その代わりに、炭酸水を飲むのは習慣になっている。炭酸水はアルコールに比べてカロリーは少なく値段も安く、すっきりするので気に入っている。夏の暑い日やお風呂上がりに氷をたっぷり入れた炭酸水を飲むのは一日の中で一番好きな瞬間かもしれない。比較的健康的な習慣だと思っているが、500mlのペットボトルのごみを出してしまうことだけが問題だ。多い時は一日3,4本飲んだこともあるけれど、一日一本や2日で一本程度に控えたほうがいいと思っている。

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Sparkling Water Instead of Alcohol アルコールより炭酸水

I don’t drink much alcohol.

But I rarely go out in the evening to see friends, and alcohol just makes me sleepy.

So I don’t really see any benefits in drinking it.

Instead, I’ve made a habit of drinking sparkling water.

I like it because it’s cheaper, lower in calories, and refreshing.

Having a glass of sparkling water with lots of ice, especially on a hot summer day or right after a bath, is probably my favorite moment of the day.

I consider it a fairly healthy habit, though the plastic waste from 500 ml bottles is the downside.

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Sparkling Water Instead of Alcohol アルコールより炭酸水

I don’t drink much alcohol.

But I rarely go out in the evening to see friends, and alcohol just makes me sleepy.

So I don’t really see any benefits in drinking it.

Instead, I’ve made a habit of drinking sparkling water.

I like it because it’s cheaper, lower in calories, and refreshing.

Having a glass of sparkling water with lots of ice, especially on a hot summer day or right after a bath, is probably my favorite moment of the day.

I consider it a fairly healthy habit, though the plastic waste from 500 ml bottles is the downside.

At one point, I was drinking three to four bottles a day, but now I’m trying to cut it down to one bottle a day, or even one every two days.

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I don’t drink much alcohol.

Instead, I’ve made a habit of drinking sparkling water.

I like it because it’s cheaper, lower in calories, and refreshing.

Having a glass of sparkling water with lots of ice, especially on a hot summer day or right after a bath, is probably my favorite moment of the day.

At one point, I was drinking three to four bottles a day, but now I’m trying to cut it down to one bottle a day, or even one every two days.

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Sparkling Water Instead of Alcohol アルコールより炭酸水


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I don’t drink much alcohol.


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I don’t drink much alcohol much. I don’t drink alcohol much.

This is about a really precise detail here but: "I don't drink alcohol much" ~= "I rarely drink alcohol" - focuses more on the frequency "I don't drink much alcohol" ~= "I only drink small volumes of alcohol" - focuses more on the quantity The first is a little more natural for the context.

I think people who do enjoy it either for the taste, the relaxed feeling it gives them, or the socializing that comes with drinking with friends.


I think people who do enjoy it either for the taste, the relaxeding feeling it gives them, or the socializing that comes with drinking with friends. I think people who do enjoy it either for the taste, the relaxing feeling it gives them, or the socializing that comes with drinking with friends.

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SUGGESTION: Try to avoid over-using the word "I" when writing. VOCABULARY: The word "drinkers" refers to people who drink alcohol. (People who do not drink alcohol are called "non-drinkers.")

I think people who do, enjoy it either for the taste, the relaxed feeling it gives them, or the socializing that comes with drinking with friends. I think people who do, enjoy it either for the taste, the relaxed feeling it gives them, or the socializing that comes with drinking with friends.

I think people who do enjoy it, enjoy it either for the taste, the relaxed feeling it gives them, or the socializing that comes with drinking with friends. I think people who do enjoy it, enjoy it either for the taste, the relaxed feeling it gives them, or the socializing that comes with drinking with friends.

I think people who do enjoy it either for the taste, the relaxed feeling it gives them, or the socializing that comes withfrom drinking with friends. I think people who do enjoy it either for the taste, the relaxed feeling it gives them, or the socializing that comes from drinking with friends.

Again, super small detail, "from" or "with" are actually acceptable in this case, but "with... with..." sounds a little awkward.

But I rarely go out in the evening to see friends, and alcohol just makes me sleepy.


But I rarely go out in the evening to see friends, and alcohol just makes me sleepy., But I rarely go out in the evening to see friends, and alcohol just makes me sleepy,

ButHowever, I rarely go out in the evening to see friends, and alcohol just makes me sleepy. However, I rarely go out in the evening to see friends, and alcohol just makes me sleepy.

If *speaking* : But I rarely . . . . If *writing* (slightly more formally): However, I rarely . . .

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So I don’t really see any benefits in drinking it.


Sso I don’t really see any benefits in drinking it. so I don’t really see any benefits in drinking it.

So I don’t really see any benefits in drinking iCOMMENT: If *speaking* this is fine. If *writing* a bit more formally, the word "Hence" is apt. (Spoken and written English are slightly different.) COMMENT: If *speaking* this is fine. If *writing* a bit more formally, the word "Hence" is apt. (Spoken and written English are slightly different.)

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At one point, I was drinking three to four bottles a day, but now I’m trying to cut it down to one bottle a day, or even one every two days.


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At one point, I was drinking three to four bottles a day, but now I’m trying to cut it down to one bottle a day, or even one every two days. At one point, I was drinking three to four bottles a day, but now I’m trying to cut it down to one bottle, or even one every two days.

Instead, I’ve made a habit of drinking sparkling water.


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I like it because it’s cheaper, lower in calories, and refreshing.


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Having a glass of sparkling water with lots of ice, especially on a hot summer day or right after a bath, is probably my favorite moment of the day.


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I consider it a fairly healthy habit, though the plastic waste from 500 ml bottles is the downside.


I consider it a fairly healthy habit, though the plastic waste from the 500 ml bottles is the downside. I consider it a fairly healthy habit, though the plastic waste from the 500 ml bottles is the downside.

I consider it to be a fairly healthy habit, although the plastic wastone of the downsides is the leftover plastic—which may pose fprom 500 ml bottblems isfor the downsideenvironment. I consider it to be a fairly healthy habit, although one of the downsides is the leftover plastic—which may pose problems for the environment.

This one depends on what you were going for: I hope that I was able to express your thoughts properly.

I consider it a fairly healthy habit, though the plastic waste from 500 ml bottles is thea downside. I consider it a fairly healthy habit, though the plastic waste from 500 ml bottles is a downside.

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I consider it a fairly healthy habit, though the plastic waste from 500 ml bottles is thea downside. I consider it a fairly healthy habit, though the plastic waste from 500 ml bottles is a downside.

"the" downside kind of rules out there can be other downsides (e.g. teeth decay)

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