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I went hiking again this Saturday.
This time, my friends and I ventured a bit too far off the beaten path. We ended up lost at the summit for a while. Luckily, after pushing through some dense patches of thorns, we finally found our way down to a small village.
Also, it turned out to be a blessing in disguise. A variety of beautiful wildflowers were blooming along the thorny way.
I captured some of them and put together a video for you. You can see it here: https://youtube.com/shorts/H7oW1TnsXQw?si=_eimRsBC__2YMdGL
Believe me, these are not the most beautiful ones. The most stunning scenery was exactly where the trail was toughest to navigate. Sadly, I had to focus on safety in those tricky spots and couldn't pull out my phone to record.
Even though I was being careful, I still took a hard fall on my right side. Nothing serious. Thankfully, my daily yoga balance practice saved me!
Because of this adventure, I felt a little tired yesterday and didn't have the energy to narrate the video.
Hope you can still feel the vibe I was excited for.
Flowers in the Mountains
I went hiking again this Saturday.
This time, my friends and I ventured a bit too far off the beaten path.
We ended up lost at the summit for a while.
Luckily, after pushing through some dense patches of thorns, we finally found our way down to a small village.
Also, it turned out to be a blessing in disguise.
A variety of beautiful wildflowers were blooming along the thorny way.
I captured some of them and put together a video for you.
You can see it here: https://youtube.com/shorts/H7oW1TnsXQw?si=_eimRsBC__2YMdGL
Believe me, these are not the most beautiful ones.
The most stunning scenery was exactly where the trail was toughest to navigate.
Sadly, I had to focus on safety in those tricky spots and couldn't pull out my phone to record.
Even though I was being careful, I still took a hard fall on my right side.
Nothing serious.
Thankfully, my daily yoga balance practice saved me!
Because of this adventure, I felt a little tired yesterday and didn't have the energy to narrate the video.
Hope you can still feel the vibe I was excited for.
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Flowers in the Mountains
I went hiking again this Saturday.
This time, my friends and I ventured a bit too far off the beaten path.
We ended up lost at the summit for a while.
Luckily, after pushing through some dense patches of thorns, we finally found our way down to a small village.
Also, it turned out to be a blessing in disguise.
A variety of beautiful wildflowers were blooming along the thorny way.
I captured some of them and put together a video for you.
You can see it here: https://youtube.com/shorts/H7oW1TnsXQw?si=_eimRsBC__2YMdGL
Believe me, these are not the most beautiful ones.
The most stunning scenery was exactly where the trail was toughest to navigate.
Sadly, I had to focus on safety in those tricky spots and couldn't pull out my phone to record.
Even though I was being careful, I still took a hard fall on my right side.
Nothing serious.
Thankfully, my daily yoga balance practice saved me!
Because of this adventure, I felt a little tired yesterday and didn't have the energy to narrate the video.
HI hope you can still feel the vibe I was excited forabout.
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