In the beginning I was not convinced, because I know that the language is too complicated. In the beginning I was not convinced, because I know that the language is too complicated.

without the article 'the' it sounds like you mean language is general is too complicated rather than a specific one.

In the beginning I was not convinced, because I know that the language is too complicated. In the beginning I was not convinced, because I know that the language is too complicated.

Even iI was sometimes even angry with myself for that electdecision, to come here. I was sometimes even angry with myself for that decision, to come here.

'election' isn't used like that. That normally referred to voting for politicians.

Even i wasI was even sometimes angry with myself for that electdecision, to come here. I was even sometimes angry with myself for that decision to come here.

Liveing in Berlin Living in Berlin

I chose to come here because my boyfriend had found a job, so the plan was to come here with him, and look for a professional job for me tooyself as well. I chose to come here because my boyfriend had found a job, so the plan was to come here with him, and look for a professional job for myself as well.

I like the story of Berlin, I like going to museums, going to and parties. I like the story of Berlin, going to museums and parties.

Also yYou can also find restaurants, bars and bakeries from different countries. You can also find restaurants, bars and bakeries from different countries.

Also yYou can also find restaurants, bars and bakeries from different countries. You can also find restaurants, bars and bakeries from different countries.

But not everything is perfect here., But not everything is perfect here,

Ffor example the weather!! for example the weather!!

This felt like one sentance with a comma rather than two sentances.

Winter is very cold, always is claoudy, the night iss are too long., Winter is very cold, always is cloudy, the nights are too long,

Winter is very cold,; it is always is claoudy, and the night is too long. Winter is very cold; it is always cloudy, and the night is too long.

Aand summer is too short! and summer is too short!

When making a list separated by commas the and always comes before the last thing.

Another thing that is negative about living here, is that I'm so far away from my family and friends, I miss them! Another thing that is negative about living here is that I'm so far away from my family and friends, I miss them!

Another thing that is negative about living here, is that I'm so far from my family and friends,. I miss them! Another thing that is negative about living here, is that I'm so far from my family and friends. I miss them!

Meanwhile, i will enjoy to liveliving in Berlin Meanwhile, i will enjoy living in Berlin

Meanwhile, i will enjoy to liveBut in the meantime, I enjoy living in Berlin But in the meantime, I enjoy living in Berlin