May 4, 2026
When I was nineteen years old a really beautiful woman broken my heart. In this moment I search the solution of my problems in the reading, I read one of the best books I ever known in my whole life it name is "Stillness is the key". This book is about the human mind, the way to the people control their emotions and see the world. The author explain how the people worries to things we can't change for example worries about the countries economies but with average people is out of our control. Is a book for persons how wants to improve and change your mind, it looks like a normal autohelp book but it is different; The only characters are you and the author like a student and a sensei. I really like this book because it changed the mode I feeling and control my emotions is a good recomendation for all the people.
Cuando tenia diecinueve años una mujer bastante bonita me rompió el corazón. En ese momento busqué la solución a mis problemas en la lectura. Leí uno de los mejores libros que jamás haya conocido en toda mi vida su nombre es "La quietud es la clave". Este libro es sobre la mente humana, la manera en que las personas controlan sus emociones y ven el mundo. El autor explica como las personas se preocupan en cosas que no podemos cambiar por ejemplo las economias de países pero para las personas promedios esta fuera de nuestro control. Es un libro para personas que quieren mejorar y cambiar su mente, parece un libro de autoayuda normal pero es diferente, Los unicos personajes son el autor y tú como un estudiante y su sensei. De verdad me gusta este libro porque cambió el modo en que me siento y controlo mis emociones es una buena recomendación para todas las personas.
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Great writing! I will have to check the book out :)
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Hello Friends this is a paragraph about my favorite book. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I was nineteen years old a really beautiful woman broken my heart. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In this moment I search the solution of my problems in the reading, I read one of the best books I ever known in my whole life it name is "Stillness is the key".
In this moment, I searched for the solution I think this would better as 3 sentences, to make things clearer. We usually capitalise all the words in a title (though admittedly sometimes people don't capitalise small joining words like "is", "and", "the"). |
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This book is about the human mind, the way to the people control their emotions and see the world.
This book is about the human mind, and the way t |
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The author explain how the people worries to things we can't change for example worries about the countries economies but with average people is out of our control.
The author explain how We generally worry ABOUT something |
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Is a book for persons how wants to improve and change your mind, it looks like a normal autohelp book but it is different;
It is a book for pe OR: "It is a book for you if you want to improve and change your mind...", if you wanted to keep the "your" as it is. Don't forget the "It" at the start of the sentence. It's called "self-help" in English. |
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The only characters are you and the author like a student and a sensei. The only characters are you and the author, like a student and a sensei. The only characters are you and the author, like a student and a sensei. |
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I really like this book because it changed the mode I feeling and control my emotions is a good recomendation for all the people.
I really like this book because it changed the I think "way" would sound much better here. |
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