Jan. 26, 2024
After reading an article ，I wrote a summary.
I found something very interesting when I reading this article. That is the weather of 2007. The weather in 2007 was very strange. This year was the hottest year in history. Even the ice in Arctic was beginning to melt. Although there were many hurricanes during 2007. I got some questions with this article. What’s the reason of the weird weather in 2007? Is this had any impacts for human’s live?
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After reading an article ，I wrote a summary.
I found something very interesting when I was reading this article. I found something very interesting when I was reading this article.
That isIt was about the weather ofin 2007.
It was about the weather in 2007.
not necessarily incorrect but can be confusing to read
The weather in 2007 was very strange.
This year was the hottest year in history.
Even the ice in Arctic was beginning to melt.
Although there were many hurricanes during 2007.
I gothad some questions with this article.
I had some questions with this article.
"got" is very colloquial and shouldn't be used in written form
What’s the reason ofor the weirdunusual weather in 2007?
What’s the reason for the unusual weather in 2007?
Is thisDid it hadve any any impacts for in human’s lives?
Did it have any any impact in humans lives?
"Is this had" is incorrect
"Did this have" is the correct past form
you could also use "i wonder if this had" any impact etc
also the 's marks a possessive /jack's jacket/ /this book is mark's book/ or an abbreviation /it's instead of it is/
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I also wonder why the weather in 2007 was strange!
After reading an article ，I wrote a summary.
After reading an article，I wrote a summary.
I found something very interesting when I reading this (an) article.
I found something very interesting when I read (an) article.
"This" isn't wrong, but in written language, this would be better unless you are going to tell readers the name of the article or give a link.
T…that is the weather of 2007.
…that is the weather of 2007.
This should have been combined with the sentence before, with a comma.
The weather in 2007 was very strange.
Thisat year was the hottest year in history.
That year was the hottest year in history.
"This year" would refer to 2024.
Even the ice in Arctic was beginning to melt.
AlthoughHowever (?), there were many hurricanes during 2007.
However (?), there were many hurricanes during 2007.
This is not a complete sentence. "Although" introduces a dependent clause, and sentences always need to contain an independent one. If you meant for this to be a separate sentence, "however" would be suitable.
I gothave some questions withabout this article.
I have some questions about this article.
"Got" may be said informally by some speakers, but it would not be considered "standard," especially in writing.
What’s the reason ofor the weird weather in 2007?
What’s the reason for the weird weather in 2007?
Reason is followed by "for," not "of."
IsDid this hadve any impacts for on human’s lives?
Did this have any impact on human lives?
Here you are talking about people in general, so "human's" does not make sense. Using "human" as an adjective, like I did in the correction, is fine, however,
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After reading an article ，I wrote a summary.
After reading an article This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I found something very interesting when I reading this article.
I found something very interesting when I read "This" isn't wrong, but in written language, this would be better unless you are going to tell readers the name of the article or give a link. I found something very interesting when I was reading this article. I found something very interesting when I was reading this article. |
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That is the weather of 2007.
This should have been combined with the sentence before, with a comma.
not necessarily incorrect but can be confusing to read |
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The weather in 2007 was very strange. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This year was the hottest year in history.
Th "This year" would refer to 2024. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Even the ice in Arctic was beginning to melt. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Although there were many hurricanes during 2007.
This is not a complete sentence. "Although" introduces a dependent clause, and sentences always need to contain an independent one. If you meant for this to be a separate sentence, "however" would be suitable. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I got some questions with this article.
I "Got" may be said informally by some speakers, but it would not be considered "standard," especially in writing.
I "got" is very colloquial and shouldn't be used in written form |
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What’s the reason of the weird weather in 2007?
What’s the reason Reason is followed by "for," not "of."
What’s the reason |
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Is this had any impacts for human’s live?
Here you are talking about people in general, so "human's" does not make sense. Using "human" as an adjective, like I did in the correction, is fine, however,
"Is this had" is incorrect "Did this have" is the correct past form you could also use "i wonder if this had" any impact etc also the 's marks a possessive /jack's jacket/ /this book is mark's book/ or an abbreviation /it's instead of it is/ |
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