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I like this sentence, that b: Being with my family for Christmas is the greatest gift of all. I like this sentence: Being with my family for Christmas is the greatest gift of all.

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You could also say: Many Koreans from older/previous generations were focused on work in their companies.

As a result, many kids now didn't like workaholic fathers. As a result, many kids now didn't like workaholic fathers.

Added "now" to clarify that we are talking about the present, and not about the generations before.

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Not entirely certain what you wanted to express, but I've tried to rephrase it more naturally with minimal changes.

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So I am always trying to be with my family as a higher priority thanprioritise being with my family over my works. So I am always trying to prioritise being with my family over my work.

So I am always trying to btreat time with my family as a higher priority than my works. So I am always trying to treat time with my family as a higher priority than my work.

You could also say: So I am always trying to prioritize time with my family over my work.

I hope my sons will understand my thoughts on this someday. I hope my sons will understand my thoughts on this someday.

Best to add "on this" to distinguish that you are talking about your thoughts on work and family, and not your thoughts in general.