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Qin dynasty, however, won battles from battles and eventually united China in 221 BC. Chinese history textbook concluded one of the main reasons was that this inland kingdom had strictly implemented a policy led by Shang Yang, known as "Shang Yang’s Reform" in history. This was actually a policy pursuing prosperity and strengthening the interests of the nation but simultaneously weakening individual influence. The reform has proved to be effective, and Qin became the first empire that created a centralized country in China. Unfortunately, Shang Yang’s ideas have lasted to this day. His ideas also weakened the elites' interests and made the top leaders or emperors become truly dictators

Tang Dynasty (618 to 907) and Song Dynasty (960–1279) were the most attractive, and prosperous in ancient China. At their peak times, both the emperors of the different periods respected and adopted the suggestions from elites, this was another kind of democracy I think. Especially in the Song Dynasty, this country was indeed drawn into a free economic market, private economies were extremely powerful and widespread. Especially in the Song Dynasty, this country was indeed drawn into a free economic market, private economies were extremely powerful and widespread. The interesting thing is, the Japanese only learned from these two dynasties in ancient China. Today, many people are being suggested: if you want to discover or enjoy Tang and Song cultures, go to Japan is the perfect choice.

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This was actually a policy pursuing prosperity and strengthening the interests of the nation but simultaneously weakening individual influence.

Unfortunately, Shang Yang’s ideas have lasted to this day.

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Qin dynasty, however, won battles from after battles and eventually united China in 221 BC.

Is “won battle after battle” what you mean?

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His ideas also weakened the elites' interests and made the top leaders or emperors become trulye dictators . The Tang Dynasty (618 to 907) and Song Dynasty (960–1279) were the most attractive, and prosperous in ancient China.

“Attractive” to whom?

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Qin dynasty, however, won battles from battles and eventually united China in 221 BC.


The Qin dynasty, however, won battles from battles and eventually united China in 221 BC. The Qin dynasty, however, won battles and eventually united China in 221 BC.

Qin dynasty, however, won battles from after battles and eventually united China in 221 BC. Qin dynasty, however, won battle after battle and eventually united China in 221 BC.

Is “won battle after battle” what you mean?

Qin dynasty, however, won won from battles fromto battles and eventually united China in 221 BC. Qin dynasty won from battles to battles and eventually united China in 221 BC.

Chinese history textbook concluded one of the main reasons was that this inland kingdom had strictly implemented a policy led by Shang Yang, known as "Shang Yang’s Reform" in history.


The Chinese history textbook concluded one of the main reasons was that this inland kingdom had strictly implemented a policy led by Shang Yang, known as "Shang Yang’s Reform" in history. The Chinese history textbook concluded one of the main reasons was that this inland kingdom had strictly implemented a policy led by Shang Yang, known as "Shang Yang’s Reform" in history.

Chinese history textbooks concluded one of the main reasons was that this inland kingdom had strictly implemented a policy led by Shang Yang, known [in history | by historians] as "Shang Yang’s Reform" in history." Chinese history textbooks concluded one of the main reasons was that this inland kingdom had strictly implemented a policy led by Shang Yang, known [in history | by historians] as "Shang Yang’s Reform."

Chinese history textbook concluded that one of the main reasons was that this inland kingdom had strictly implemented a policy led by Shang Yang, known as "Shang Yang’s Reform" in history. Chinese history textbook concluded that one of the main reasons was that this inland kingdom had strictly implemented a policy led by Shang Yang, known as "Shang Yang’s Reform" in history.

This was actually a policy pursuing prosperity and strengthening the interests of the nation but simultaneously weakening individual influence.


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The reform has proved to be effective, and Qin became the first empire that created a centralized country in China.


The reform has proved to be effective, and Qin became the first empire that created a centralized countrystate in China. The reform proved to be effective, and Qin became the first empire that created a centralized state in China.

Unfortunately, Shang Yang’s ideas have lasted to this day.


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His ideas also weakened the elites' interests and made the top leaders or emperors become truly dictators Tang Dynasty (618 to 907) and Song Dynasty (960–1279) were the most attractive, and prosperous in ancient China.


His ideas also weakened the elites' interests and made the top leaders or emperors become trulye dictators . The Tang Dynasty (618 to 907) and Song Dynasty (960–1279) were the most attractive, and prosperous in ancient China. His ideas also weakened the elites' interests and made the top leaders or emperors become true dictators. The Tang Dynasty (618 to 907) and Song Dynasty (960–1279) were the most attractive and prosperous in ancient China.

“Attractive” to whom?

His ideas also weakened the elites' interests and made the top leaders or emperors become truly dictators . Tang Dynasty (618 to 907) and Song Dynasty (960–1279) were the most attractive, and prosperous in ancient China. His ideas also weakened the elites' interests and made the top leaders or emperors become truly dictators. Tang Dynasty (618 to 907) and Song Dynasty (960–1279) were the most attractive, and prosperous in ancient China.

At their peak times, both the emperors of the different periods respected and adopted the suggestions from elites, this was another kind of democracy I think.


At their peak times, both the emperors of the different periods respected and adopted the suggestions from elites,; this was another kind of democracy I think. At their peak times, both the emperors of the different periods respected and adopted the suggestions from elites; this was another kind of democracy I think.

At their peak times, both the emperors of the different periods respected and adopted the suggestions from elites, t. This was another kind of democracy, I think. At their peak times, both the emperors of the different periods respected and adopted the suggestions from elites. This was a kind of democracy, I think.

Especially in the Song Dynasty, this country was indeed drawn into a free economic market, private economies were extremely powerful and widespread.


Especially in the Song Dynasty, this country was indeed drawn into a free economic market, private economies were extremely powerful and widespread.


Especially in the Song Dynasty, this country was indeed drawn into a free economic market, and private economies were extremely powerful and widespread. Especially in the Song Dynasty, this country was indeed drawn into a free economic market, and private economies were extremely powerful and widespread.

The interesting thing is, the Japanese only learned from these two dynasties in ancient China.


Today, many people are being suggested: if you want to discover or enjoy Tang and Song cultures, go to Japan is the perfect choice.


Today, many people are being suggested: if you want to discover or enjoy Tang and Song cultures, going to Japan is the perfect choice. Today, many people suggest: if you want to discover or enjoy Tang and Song cultures, going to Japan is the perfect choice.

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