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Cold But Good Day

Today is cold day.
However, it’s a good day.
We won a drawing and bought a Switch 2 at a hobby shop!
My daughter really delighted.
Now, we are waiting to finish downloading Mario Kart.
We will enjoy it.

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Nov. 10, 2025

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Nov. 10, 2025

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Cold But Good Day

However, it’s a good day.

Now, we are waiting to finish downloading Mario Kart.

We will enjoy it.

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Koheisan

Nov. 10, 2025

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Cold But Good Day


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Today is cold day.


Today is a cold day. Today is a cold day.

This very much emphasises how cold a day it is compared to other days. If you want to just state that it's cold, you could also say "It's cold today".

Today is a cold day. Today is a cold day.

However, it’s a good day.


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However, it’s a good day. However, it’s a good day.

We won a drawing and bought a Switch 2 at a hobby shop!


We won a drawingffle and bought a Switch 2 at a hobby shop! We won a raffle and bought a Switch 2 at a hobby shop!

If you mean you won a 抽選 to be able to buy the Switch 2, I think "raffle" or "lottery" would work best. I would also note that many other countries do not use this system, and things like the Switch 2 or concert tickets are sold on a first-come-first-served basis. This could mean that someone not familiar with how Japan does things that you winning a raffle is separate to buying a Switch 2. If I were rewriting with this in mind I would write something like: "We won a chance to buy a Switch 2 in a raffle, and went to a hobby shop to purchase it."

We won a drawing and bought a Switch 2 at a hobby shop! We won a drawing and bought a Switch 2 at a hobby shop!

"lottery" might be better instead of "drawing"

We won a drawing and bought a Switch 2 at a hobby shop! We won a draw and bought a Switch 2 at a hobby shop!

"draw" (or "lottery" as others suggest) is the contest "drawing" is a picture.

My daughter really delighted.


My daughter was really delighted. My daughter was really delighted.

My daughter was really delighted. My daughter was really delighted.

My daughter was really delighted. My daughter was really delighted.

Now, we are waiting to finish downloading Mario Kart.


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We will enjoy it.


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