Nov. 4, 2022
I am going to write about generation gap, as far as I considered it is a very important topic specially for people who have children and for people who work with teens. When I was younger, so much younger than today, I thought my parents didn't understand me because their lives had been very different of mine, my relationship was different, with friends, with couples; my way of thinking was different too... as a result my friends and I did a lot of things that never ever we talked with grownups.
Now a day, the scenario is different from those days, I am mother of three children and I think that I can understand them perfectly. I realize that the society is different and the way of life is different too but despite all, I fell near them... I'm not sure what they will think about this.
I am going to write about the generation gap, as far as I am considcerned it is a very important topic especially for people who have children and for people who work with teens.
I am going to write about the generation gap, as far as I am concerned it is a very important topic especially for people who have children and for people who work with teens.
When I was younger, so much younger than today, I thought my parents didn't understand me because their lives had been very different of mine, m. My relationship was different, with friends, with couples; m. My way of thinking was different too... as a result my friends and I did a lot of things that we never ever we talked with grownupabout with adults.
When I was younger, so much younger than today, I thought my parents didn't understand me because their lives had been very different of mine. My relationship was different with friends, with couples. My way of thinking was different too... as a result my friends and I did a lot of things that we never ever talked about with adults.
I think the sentence is too long and have suggested breaking into separate sentences.
I don't understand the meaning of my relationship was different, with friends, with couples - perhaps you mean 'My relationships with friends and partners were different'
Only young children would say 'grownups' - teens would not use this term.
This seems like a formal piece of writing and the puntos suspensivos would not be used in this way; more likely a semicolon. In a text message... sure use the puntos suspensivos.
Now a adays, the scenario is different from those days, I am mother of three children and I think that I can understand them perfectly.
Nowadays, the scenario is different, I am mother of three children and I think that I can understand them perfectly.
'from those days' not really incorrect but redundant and implied by nowadays (which is one word).
I realize that the society is different and the way of life is different too but despite all, I fell neargrew to be like them...
I realize that the society is different and the way of life is different too but despite all, I grew to be like them...
'I fell near them' I think you mean 'I grew to be more like them' but I am not sure.
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By the way, when I was younger, so much younger than today - I love the beatles reference.
When I was younger, so much younger than today, I thought my parents didn't understand me because their lives beenare very different ofrom mine, my relationship was different, with friends, with and couples; my way of thinking was different too... as a result, my friends and I did a lot of things that never ever we talked with grownups.
When I was younger, so much younger than today, I thought my parents didn't understand me because their lives are very different from mine, my relationship was different, with friends and couples; my way of thinking was different too... as a result, my friends and I did a lot of things that never ever we talked with grownups.
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I am going to write about generation gap, as far as I considered it is a very important topic specially for people who have children and for people who work with teens.
I am going to write about the generation gap, as far as I am con |
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When I was younger, so much younger than today, I thought my parents didn't understand me because their lives been very different of mine, my relationship was different, with friends, with couples; my way of thinking was different too... as a result my friends and I did a lot of things that never ever we talked with grownups.
When I was younger, so much younger than today, I thought my parents didn't understand me because their lives |
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Now a day, the scenario is different from those days, I am mother of three children and I think that I can understand them perfectly.
Now 'from those days' not really incorrect but redundant and implied by nowadays (which is one word). |
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I realize that the society is different and the way of life is different too but despite all, I fell near them...
I realize that the society is different and the way of life is different too but despite all, I 'I fell near them' I think you mean 'I grew to be more like them' but I am not sure. |
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I'm not sure what they will think about this. |
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When I was younger, so much younger than today, I thought my parents didn't understand me because their lives had been very different of mine, my relationship was different, with friends, with couples; my way of thinking was different too... as a result my friends and I did a lot of things that never ever we talked with grownups.
When I was younger, so much younger than today, I thought my parents didn't understand me because their lives had been very different of mine I think the sentence is too long and have suggested breaking into separate sentences. I don't understand the meaning of my relationship was different, with friends, with couples - perhaps you mean 'My relationships with friends and partners were different' Only young children would say 'grownups' - teens would not use this term. This seems like a formal piece of writing and the puntos suspensivos would not be used in this way; more likely a semicolon. In a text message... sure use the puntos suspensivos. |
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