Sept. 20, 2021
The Use of Automobiles
Topic : People in today’s world have become too dependent on automobiles.
It has passed more than one hundred years since the first mass produced automobile was invented. In my opinion, it’s acceptable for people to use automobiles more frequently than they used to. I feel this way for three reasons, which I explore in the following essay.
First of all, living without motor vehicles is nearly impossible for people who live in the countryside. Public transportations, such as trains and buses, have been abandoned these areas because it has been no longer profitable due to lack of passengers. In addition, grocery stores, train stations or public facilities are often located far from residential area since the use of automobiles are taken for granted. That’s why they are forced to drive a car whenever they go.
Secondary, it has become common among young people to borrow a car as necessary. Most university students obtain car license before their graduation in order to use it as an identification card. Most of them can’t afford to buy a car or pay parking fee in the city, so they use the car sharing service which allows them to share ownership when they need it for unintentional purposes.
Finally, driving a car is getting more safe and ecofriendly than it used to be. Car manufacturing companies make an effort to develop new models equipped with autopilot technologies and lithium ion batteries in order to curb global warming. As a result, people who live in continental countries today are likely to go travel with automobiles instead of airplanes.
In conclusion, I don’t think that people are too dependent on automobiles because it's necessary for local community or unexpected events. What is more, automobiles have become more safe and ecofriendly.
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The Use of Automobiles
Topic : People in today’s world have become too dependent on automobiles.
It has passedbeen more than one hundred years since the first mass -produced automobile was invented.
It has been more than one hundred years since the first mass-produced automobile was invented.
In my opinion, it’s acceptable for people to use automobiles more frequently than they used to.
I feel this way for three reasons, which I explore in the following essay.
First of all, living without motor vehicles is nearly impossible for people who live in the countryside.
Public transportation systems, such as trains and buses, have been abandoned in these areas because it has beenis no longer profitable due to a lack of passengers.
Public transportation systems, such as trains and buses, have been abandoned in these areas because it is no longer profitable due to a lack of passengers.
In addition, grocery stores, train stations orand public facilities are often located far from residential area since the use ofs, as access to automobiles areis taken for granted.
In addition, grocery stores, train stations and public facilities are often located far from residential areas, as access to automobiles is taken for granted.
That’s why they are forced to drive a car whenrever they go.
That’s why they are forced to drive a car wherever they go.
In an essay I would remove this sentence. It doesn't add anything.
Secondary, it has become common among young people to borrow a car as necessary.
Most university students obtain cara driver's license before their graduation in order to use it as an identification card.
Most university students obtain a driver's license before their graduation in order to use it as an identification card.
Most of them can’t afford to buy a car or pay parking fees in the city, so they use thea car sharing service whichthat allows them to share ownership when they need it for unintentional purposes.
Most of them can’t afford to buy a car or pay parking fees in the city, so they use a car sharing service that allows them to share ownership when they need it.
Finally, dDriving a car is getting more safe and eco-friendly than it used to be.
Driving a car is getting more safe and eco-friendly than it used to be.
Car manufacturing companies makeare making an effort to develop new models equipped with autopilot technologies and lithium ion batteries in order to curb global warming.
Car manufacturing companies are making an effort to develop new models equipped with autopilot technologies and lithium ion batteries in order to curb global warming.
As a result, people who live in continental countries today are likely to go travel withby automobiles instead of airplanes.
As a result, people who live in continental countries today are likely to travel by automobile instead of airplane.
Not sure what you mean by continental here.
In conclusion, I don’t think that people are too dependent on automobiles because, as it' is necessary for locrural community or unexpected eventies and occasional travel in urban areas.
In conclusion, I don’t think that people are too dependent on automobiles, as it is necessary for rural communities and occasional travel in urban areas.
What i's more, automobiles have become more safe and eco-friendly.
What's more, automobiles have become more safe and eco-friendly.
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Topic : People in today’s world have become too dependent on automobiles. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It has passed more than one hundred years since the first mass produced automobile was invented.
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In my opinion, it’s acceptable for people to use automobiles more frequently than they used to. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I feel this way for three reasons, which I explore in the following essay. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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First of all, living without motor vehicles is nearly impossible for people who live in the countryside. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Public transportations, such as trains and buses, have been abandoned these areas because it has been no longer profitable due to lack of passengers.
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In addition, grocery stores, train stations or public facilities are often located far from residential area since the use of automobiles are taken for granted.
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That’s why they are forced to drive a car whenever they go.
That’s why they are forced to drive a car whe In an essay I would remove this sentence. It doesn't add anything. |
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Secondary, it has become common among young people to borrow a car as necessary. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Most university students obtain car license before their graduation in order to use it as an identification card.
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Most of them can’t afford to buy a car or pay parking fee in the city, so they use the car sharing service which allows them to share ownership when they need it for unintentional purposes.
Most of them can’t afford to buy a car or pay parking fees in the city, so they use |
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Finally, driving a car is getting more safe and ecofriendly than it used to be.
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Car manufacturing companies make an effort to develop new models equipped with autopilot technologies and lithium ion batteries in order to curb global warming.
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As a result, people who live in continental countries today are likely to go travel with automobiles instead of airplanes.
As a result, people who live in continental countries today are likely to Not sure what you mean by continental here. |
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In conclusion, I don’t think that people are too dependent on automobiles because it's necessary for local community or unexpected events.
In conclusion, I don’t think that people are too dependent on automobiles |
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What is more, automobiles have become more safe and ecofriendly.
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