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Sept. 6, 2020

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When I see clothes in a situation that pretty people wear, the clothes would be love at first sight.
Then, I used to try to find similar ones and buy them.
After all, I would realize they look good when beautiful people wear at many times.
I’ve finally stopped starting such a pity cycle.
However, as a result of my perspective, I’ve started to always aim for being skinny in order to suit the clothes perfectly.
Yesterday, I watched Jennifer Aniston’s interview, and she said that many people is working on unrealistic goals in this interview.
I totally agreed with this.
Moreover, my mind turned happy after her stating that be happy with who you are, where you are and what you love about yourself.
She is a true Savor of me.

Recently, my thing is listening to podcasts or musics on body positivity.
I had been riddled with that I am fat and ugly, so I’m not worthy, so Therefore, something’s wrong with me because of the fat shaming voices I received from a male teacher, female and few male schoolmates in high school, much older man, and my mother.
According to my experience, in Japan, even though I have about or a little under healthy weight, I would receive fat shaming.
Today, so after changing my mindset, my mother told me you were chubby when you passed the high school entrance exam.
I was shocked but now I am okay.
I have a healthy weight and am called as chubby.
I don’t understand this world, but I have no problem about it.
I never think I want to communicate with you who loves body shaming or condescending in terms of a body shape.

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My problem

However, as a result of my perspective, I’ve started to always aim for being skinny in order to suit the clothes perfectly.

I totally agreed with this.

Today, so after changing my mindset, my mother told me you were chubby when you passed the high school entrance exam.

I was shocked but now I am okay.

I don’t understand this world, but I have no problem about it.

My problem

I totally agreed with this.

I was shocked but now I am okay.

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nnmsan

Sept. 7, 2020

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My problem


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When I see clothes in a situation that pretty people wear, they would be love at first sight.


Then, I used to try to find similar ones and buy them.


Then, I used towould try to find similar ones and buy them., because (better to connect it to the next sentence) Then, I would try to find similar ones and buy them, because (better to connect it to the next sentence)

Then, I used to try to find similar onclothes and buy them. Then, I used to try to find similar clothes and buy them.

After all, I would realize they look good when beautiful people wear at many times.


After all, I would realize they look good when beautiful people wear at many timesit. After all, I would realize they look good when beautiful people wear it.

After all, I would realize they look good when beautiful people wear at many timesould wear them often. After all, I would realize they look good when beautiful people would wear them often.

There are multiple ways to say this more naturally, but this is just what I would say.

I’ve finally stopped starting such a pity cycle.


I’ve finally stopped starting such a pityiful cycle. I’ve finally stopped such a pitiful cycle.

Again, this sounds more natural to me.

However, as a result of my perspective, I’ve started to always aim for being skinny in order to suit the clothes perfectly.


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Yesterday, I watched Jennifer Aniston’s interview, and she said that many people is working on unrealistic goals in this interview.


YBut yesterday, I watched Jennifer Aniston’s interview, and she said in this interview that many people isare working on unrealistic goals in this interview. But yesterday, I watched Jennifer Aniston’s interview, and she said in this interview that many people are working on unrealistic goals.

I think there should be a "but" since it contradicts what you thought before.

Yesterday, I watched Jennifer Aniston’s interview, and she said, in the interview, that many people isare working on unrealistic goals in this interview. Yesterday, I watched Jennifer Aniston’s interview, and she said, in the interview, that many people are working on unrealistic goals.

Putting "in the interview" at the end makes it seem that people are working on goals in the interview rather than it's what Jennifer Aniston said in an interview. I hope that makes sense.

I totally agreed with this.


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Moreover, my mind turned happy after her stating that be happy with who you are, where you are and what you love about yourself.


Moreover, my mind turnedher stating "be happy with who you are, where you are and what you love about yourself" made me happy. (OR it made me happy after sher stating that aid "be happy with who you are, where you are and what you love about yourself.") Moreover, her stating "be happy with who you are, where you are and what you love about yourself" made me happy. (OR it made me happy after she said "be happy with who you are, where you are and what you love about yourself")

Moreover, my mind turnedFurthermore, I became happy after sher stating thataid to be happy with who you are, where you are, and what you love about yourself. Furthermore, I became happy after she said to be happy with who you are, where you are, and what you love about yourself.

"Moreover" is just not a commonly used word. Furthermore is kinda formal, but I think it was more what you were trying to say. "Also" also works, and it's more casual.

She is a true Savor of me.


She is a true Savor tof me. She is a true Savor to me.

She is amy true Ssavior of me. She is my true savior.

" She truly saved me" also works.

Recently, my thing is listening to podcasts or musics on body positivity.


Recently, my "thing" is listening to podcasts or musics on body positivity. Recently, my "thing" is listening to podcasts or musics on body positivity.

honestly I don't quite know why, but adding quotation marks makes this sound better to me, pretty much optional though

Recently, my thing is listening to podcasts or musics on body positivity. Recently, my thing is listening to podcasts or music on body positivity.

I had been riddled with that I am fat and ugly, so I’m not worthy, so Therefore, something’s wrong with me because of the fat shaming voices I received from a male teacher, female and few male schoolmates in high school, much older man, and my mother.


IMy life hads been riddled with people saying that I am "fat and ugly, so I’m not worthy", so Therefore,I have been made to feel that something’s wrong with me because of the fat shaming voicecomments I received from a male teacher, female and, few male schoolmates in high school, much older man, and my mother. My life has been riddled with people saying that I am "fat and ugly, so I’m not worthy", so I have been made to feel that something’s wrong with me because of the fat shaming comments I received from a male teacher, female, few male schoolmates in high school, much older man, and my mother.

Your japanese copy was cut off so I hope this is close to what you meant

I had been riddled with thae fact I am fat and ugly, so I’m not worthy, so. Therefore, something’s wrong with me because of the fat shaming voices I received from a male teacher, a female and a few male schoolmates in high school, a much older man, and my mother. I had been riddled with the fact I am fat and ugly, so I’m not worthy. Therefore, something’s wrong with me because of the fat shaming I received from a male teacher, a female and a few male schoolmates in high school, a much older man, and my mother.

According to my experience, in Japan, even though I have about or a little under healthy weight, I would receive fat shaming.


According to my experience, in Japan, even though I have about or a little under healthy weight, I would receiveget fat shaminged. According to my experience, in Japan, even though I have about or a little under healthy weight, I would get fat shamed.

original is also completely fine but "fat shame" can also be a verb by itself, so just know that you have the option of conjugating it.

According to my experience, in Japan, even though I have about or a little under healthy weight, I would receivbe fat shaminged. According to my experience, in Japan, even though I have about or a little under healthy weight, I would be fat shamed.

Today, so after changing my mindset, my mother told me you were chubby when you passed the high school entrance exam.


TSo today, so after changing my mindset, my mother told me "you were chubby when you passed the high school entrance exam". So today, after changing my mindset, my mother told me "you were chubby when you passed the high school entrance exam".

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I was shocked but now I am okay.


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I have a healthy weight and am called as chubby.


I have a healthy weight and am called as chubby. I have a healthy weight and am called chubby.

I have a healthy weight and aI'm called as chubby. I have a healthy weight and I'm called chubby.

I don’t understand this world, but I have no problem about it.


I don’t understand this world, but I have no problemdon't worry about it. I don’t understand this world, but I don't worry about it.

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I never think I want to communicate with you who loves body shaming or condescending in terms of a body shape.


I neverdon't think I want to communicate with you who lovesanyone who body shaming ores or is condescending in terms of a body shape. I don't think I want to communicate with anyone who body shames or is condescending in terms of body shape.

I never think I never want to communicate with yousomeone who loves body shaming or who is condescending in terms of abecause of someone's body shape. I think I never want to communicate with someone who loves body shaming or who is condescending because of someone's body shape.

When I see clothes in a situation that pretty people wear, the clothes would be love at first sight.


When I see clothes in a situation that pretty people wear, the clothes would beit's love at first sight. When I see clothes that pretty people wear, it's love at first sight.

When I see clothes in a situation that pretty people wear, the clothes would beit's love at first sight. When I see clothes that pretty people wear, it's love at first sight.

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