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Sperm Whales

Today, I read something ready interesting, it´s who sperm whales help each other and to what extent they communicated needs or instructions usings clicks during labor and after the calf was born. It´s like a surprisingly coordinated and corporative social event. The behaviors that are observed that day, even unrelated animals helping the newborn. Lifting the calf out of the water to breathe and the birth attendants to the mom. The level of behavior seen, can´t just be explained by, oh, you´re related. Which conveys a pretty import message; We succeed by overcoming obstacles by working together, in spite of the fact that we're different and unrelated.

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Sperm Whales

Sperm Whales

It´s like a surprisingly coordinated and corporative social event.

Sperm Whales


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Today, I read something ready interesting, it´s who sperm whales help each other and to what extent they communicated needs or instructions usings clicks during labor and after the calf was born.


Today, I read something readlly interesting, it´s was about how sperm whales help each other, and to what extent they communicated their needs or instructions usings clicks during labor and after thea calf was born. Today, I read something really interesting, it was about how sperm whales help each other, and to what extent they communicated their needs or instructions usings clicks during labor and after a calf was born.

Today, I read something readlly interesting, it´s who about sperm whales. I learned about how they help each other and to what extenthow they communicated needs or instructions usings clicks during labor and after thea calf wais born. Today, I read something really interesting about sperm whales. I learned about how they help each other and how they communicate needs or instructions using clicks during labor and after a calf is born.

The facts about whales should be present tense. Edited a little more for general clarity

It´s like a surprisingly coordinated and corporative social event.


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It´s (like) a surprisingly coordinated and corpooperative social event. It´s (like) a surprisingly coordinated and cooperative social event.

We tend to add "like" all the time as a verbal tic, but it should be avoided in writing (unless you are casually texting a close friend, etc)

The behaviors that are observed that day, even unrelated animals helping the newborn.


The behaviors that are observed that day, showed that even unrelated animals helping the newborns. The behaviors observed that day showed that even unrelated animals help the newborns.

The behaviors that are observed that day, eon the day of a birth are very interesting/complex. Even unrelated animals helpingcome to help with the newborn. The behaviors that are observed on the day of a birth are very interesting/complex. Even unrelated animals come to help with the newborn.

"Behavior" could be singular to make a general reference, or you could make it plural if you want to insist on specific multiple behaviors. The first part of the sentence is incomplete/fragmented; I added something that would make sense here.

Lifting the calf out of the water to breathe and the birth attendants to the mom.


LiftingBirth attendants helped the mom lift the calf out of the water to breathe and the birth attendants to the mom. Birth attendants helped the mom lift the calf out of the water to breathe .

LiftingThey come to lift the calf out of the water tso it can breathe, and othe birthrs attendants to the momther. They come to lift the calf out of the water so it can breathe, and others attend to the mother.

"Mom" is a very familiar term and wouldn't really be used in the context of nature / animal studies unless you want to deliberately liken them to a human family

The level of behavior seen, can´t just be explained by, oh, you´re related.


The level of behavior seen, can´t just be explained by, oh, you´ assuming they are related. The level of behavior seen can´t just be explained by assuming they are related.

The level of behavior seen, can´t just be explained by, oh, youthey´re related. The level of behavior seen can´t just be explained by, oh, they´re related.

Which conveys a pretty import message;


Which conveys a pretty important message;: Which conveys a pretty important message:

We succeed by overcoming obstacles by working together, in spite of the fact that we're different and unrelated.


Wwe succeed byin overcoming obstacles by working together, in spite of the fact that we're different and unrelated. we succeed in overcoming obstacles by working together, in spite of the fact that we're different and unrelated.

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