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Dec. 21, 2020

I was lazy those few days. I felt tired after the First Aid course. I was exciting during the classes. Especially when I passed the exam. I felt that I was powerful because my result was better than my expectation. It was easier than my image. But I thought that maybe just because it was a very short term course. I'm not sure I'll have the same energy to focus on a long term course. Anyway, I need to try.

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Dec. 21, 2020

I was lazy those few days.

I felt tired after the First Aid course.

Anyway, I need to try.

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hym

Dec. 23, 2020

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Dec. 21, 2020


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I was lazy those few days.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I felt tired after the First Aid course.


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I was exciting during the classes.


I was excitinged during the classes., I was excited during the classes,

It would be better if you wrote "I was excited during class" but since you might be referring to specific first aid classes here I did not change it

Especially when I passed the exam.


Eespecially when I passed the exam. especially when I passed the exam.

Combine with previous sentence

I felt that I was powerful because my result was better than my expectation.


I felt that I was powerful because my result was better than my expectation. I felt powerful because my result was better than my expectation.

Or "I had exceeded my expectations"

It was easier than my image.


It was easier than myI had imageined. It was easier than I had imagined.

But I thought that maybe just because it was a very short term course.


But I thought that maybe that was just because it was a very short term course. But I thought that maybe that was just because it was a very short term course.

I'm not sure I'll have the same energy to focus on a long term course.


I'm not sure I'll have the same energy to focus on awhen I complete the long term course. I'm not sure I'll have the same energy when I complete the long term course.

If you are definitely going to do a long term course in the future, you can keep "I'll" If you're considering a hypothetical situation, "I'd" would be better and you can keep the rest of the sentence as is

Anyway, I need to try.


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