Dec. 22, 2020
I was lazy those few days. I felt tired after the First Aid course. I was exciting during the classes. Especially when I passed the exam. I felt that I was powerful because my result was better than my expectation. It was easier than my image. But I thought that maybe just because it was a very short term course. I'm not sure I'll have the same energy to focus on a long term course. Anyway, I need to try.
Dec. 21, 2020
I was lazy those few days.
I felt tired after the First Aid course.
I was excitinged during the classes.,
I was excited during the classes,
It would be better if you wrote "I was excited during class" but since you might be referring to specific first aid classes here I did not change it
Eespecially when I passed the exam.
especially when I passed the exam.
Combine with previous sentence
I felt that I was powerful because my result was better than my expectation.
I felt powerful because my result was better than my expectation.
Or "I had exceeded my expectations"
It was easier than myI had imageined.
It was easier than I had imagined.
But I thought that maybe that was just because it was a very short term course. But I thought that maybe that was just because it was a very short term course.
I'm not sure I'll have the same energy to focus on awhen I complete the long term course.
I'm not sure I'll have the same energy when I complete the long term course.
If you are definitely going to do a long term course in the future, you can keep "I'll"
If you're considering a hypothetical situation, "I'd" would be better and you can keep the rest of the sentence as is
Anyway, I need to try.
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I was lazy those few days. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I felt tired after the First Aid course. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I was exciting during the classes.
I was excit It would be better if you wrote "I was excited during class" but since you might be referring to specific first aid classes here I did not change it |
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Especially when I passed the exam.
Combine with previous sentence |
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I felt that I was powerful because my result was better than my expectation.
I felt Or "I had exceeded my expectations" |
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It was easier than my image.
It was easier than |
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But I thought that maybe just because it was a very short term course. But I thought that maybe that was just because it was a very short term course. But I thought that maybe that was just because it was a very short term course. |
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I'm not sure I'll have the same energy to focus on a long term course.
I'm not sure I'll have the same energy If you are definitely going to do a long term course in the future, you can keep "I'll" If you're considering a hypothetical situation, "I'd" would be better and you can keep the rest of the sentence as is |
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Anyway, I need to try. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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