March 14, 2022
Rainy Day
It has been raining for two days and the weather becomes warm.
I told my son that this rain will help trees bust out.
From this rain, the spring really starts.
We hope that we can walk around to see flowers.
And we promise that we will go on a trip for feeling the nature.
I hope the day will come soon.
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Rainy Day
It has been raining for two days and now the weather has becomes warm.
It has been raining for two days and now the weather has become warm.
I told my son that this rain will help (the) trees bust outloom.
I told my son that this rain will help (the) trees bloom.
FromAfter this rain, the spring really starts.
After this rain, spring really starts.
We hope that we can walk around to see flowers.
And we promise that we willo go on a trip for feeling thto see nature.
And we promise to go on a trip to see nature.
"see" is more natural than "feel" but both are correct
I hope theat day will come soon.
I hope that day will come soon.
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Good writing and enjoy the weather :)
March 15, 2022
Thank you very much :)
It has been raining for two days andthen the weather becoames warm.
It has been raining for two days then the weather became warm.
I told my son that this rain will help trees bust outloom.
I told my son that this rain will help trees bloom.
And we promise that we willo go on a trip forto feeling the nature.
And we promise to go on a trip to feel the nature.
I hope theat day will come soon.
I hope that day will come soon.
March 15, 2022
Thank you so much.
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It has been raining for two days and the weather becomes warm.
It has been raining for two days
It has been raining for two days and now the weather has become |
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I told my son that this rain will help trees bust out.
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I told my son that this rain will help (the) trees b |
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From this rain, the spring really starts.
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We hope that we can walk around to see flowers. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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And we promise that we will go on a trip for feeling the nature.
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And we promise t "see" is more natural than "feel" but both are correct |
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I hope the day will come soon.
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I hope th |
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