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Wuhan City Being Cut Off Due to New Coronavirus WHO Conveys

With the recent outbreak of pneumonia due to the new coronavirus, Wuhan city, the epicenter of the outbreak in China has decided to cut off its public transportation system starting at 10 AM on January 23rd local time. This unusual measure is taken to restrict the public’s transportation to contain the spread of infection.
The World Health Organization conveyed a meeting at the Headquarters in Geneva in the afternoon of 22nd January local time regarding the new coronavirus, and have decided to further discuss preventive measures throughout the 23rd. According to the Chinese state media, Wuhan City will be shutting off intercity busses, subways as well as closing down railway stations and airports. Civilians are banned from leaving the city unless “under special circumstances”. The release of a seal-off is to be announced. Wuhan City is a metropolis with a population of over 10 million people.
The death toll from the new coronavirus reached 17 people as of Wednesday. So far, coronavirus has infected more than 500 people including patients in China, Japan, the U.S., South Korea, Thailand and Taiwan.
The World Health Organization discussed whether to announce a global health emergency regarding the epidemic of the new coronavirus at an emergency meeting held on 22nd January. However, they postponed their decision for further discussion on 23rd.


武漢市が交通機関を停止、新型肺炎で WHOは緊急会合

新型コロナウイルスによる肺炎の感染拡大を受け、発生地の中国・武漢市は現地時間23日午前10時(日本時間同11時)から公共交通機関の運行を一時停止すると発表した。感染封じ込めのため、市民の移動を制限する異例の措置だ。世界保健機関(WHO)は現地時間22日午後、ジュネーブの本部で新型コロナウイルスに関する緊急会合を開き、23日も対策について協議することを決めた。中国国営メディアによると、武漢市当局は市内のバス、地下鉄などを止めるほか、市外に出る鉄道の駅や空港も閉鎖する。特別な事情がない限り市民が市外から出ることを禁じる。運行再開の時期については別途告知するとしている。武漢市は人口1000万人を超える大都市。
新型コロナウイルスによる死亡者は22日までに17人に達した。感染者は中国のほか、日本と米国、韓国、タイ、台湾で確認され、500人を超えている。
WHOは22日の緊急会合で、新型コロナウイルスの感染拡大について「国際的に懸念される公衆衛生の緊急事態」を宣言するか否かを協議した。この日の会合では結論は出ず、23日も継続協議する。

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With the recent outbreak of pneumonia due to the new coronavirus, Wuhan city, the epicenter of the outbreak in China, has decided to cut off its public transportation system starting at 10 AM on January 23rd local time.

You don't need to add city after Wuhan. Your title already informs the reader that Wuhan is a city.

This unusual measure ishas been taken to restrict the public’s transportation to contain the spread of infection.

Most of your entry is in present perfect tense, so this sentence should allow follow that pattern.

The World Health Organization conveyned at a meeting at the Headquarters in Geneva in the afternoon of 22nd January 22nd, local time, regarding the new coronavirus, and have decided to further discuss preventive measures throughout the 23rd.

There should only be a comma before and if the following line is a complete sentence.

Correct Example: I am hungry, and I will make pancakes for breakfast.
Incorrect Example: I am hungry, and will make pancakes for breakfast.

According to the Chinese state media, Wuhan City will be shutting off intercity busses, and subways, as well as closing down railway stations and airports.

Civilians are banned from leaving the city unless it is “under special circumstances”. The release of a.” A seal-off is to be announced. Wuhan City is a metropolis with a population of over 10 million people.

The death toll from the new coronavirus reached 17 people as of Wednesday. So far, coronavirus has infected more than 500 people including patients in China, Japan, the U.S., South Korea, Thailand and Taiwan.


The World Health Organization discussed whether to announce a global health emergency regarding the epidemic of the new coronavirus at an emergency meeting held on 22nd January. However, they postponed their decision for further discussion on 23rd.

It sounds a bit awkward to say "release of a seal-off." Instead, you can just say that a seal-off will be announced.

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Great job! I had a good time reading it.

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qwerty1980s

Jan. 23, 2020

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Thank you so much!

Wuhan City Being Cut Off Due to New Coronavirus WHO Conveys

With the recent outbreak of pneumonia due to the new coronavirus, Wuhan city, the epicenter of the outbreak in China, has decided to cut off its public transportation system starting at 10 AM local time on January 23rd local time.

This unusual measure is being taken to restrict the public’s transportation in order to contain the spread of infection.

More natural: "This unusual measure to restrict the public's movements is being taken in the hope of preventing further spread of the infection."

The World Health Organization conveyned a meeting about the Hnew coronavirus at its headquarters in Geneva ion the afternoon of 22nd January local time regarding the new coronavirus22nd, and haves decided to further discuss preventive measures throughout the 23rd.

According to the Chinese state media, Wuhan City will be shutting off intercity busses, and subways, as well as closing down railway stations and airports.

Civilians are banned from leaving the city unlessexcept “under special circumstances”. The release of a seal-off isA quarantine(?) is expected to be announced. Wuhan City is a metropolis with a population of over 10 million people.
The death toll
ofrom the new coronavirus reached 17 people as of Wednesday. So far, the coronavirus has infected more than 500 people, including patients in China, Japan, the U.S., South Korea, Thailand, and Taiwan.
The World Health Organization
, at an emergency meeting held on January 22nd, discussed whether to announce a global health emergency regardinglated to the epidemic of the new coronavirus at an emergency meeting held on 22nd January. However, they postponed their decision forpending further discussion on the 23rd.

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Well written! This is a hard topic, and a scary situation for everyone.

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qwerty1980s

Jan. 23, 2020

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Thank you so much for your detailed correction! Yes, I agree. I can only hope that it doesn't spread further than it already has.

Wuhan City Being Cut Off Due to New Coronavirus WHO Conveys


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With the recent outbreak of pneumonia due to the new coronavirus, Wuhan city, the epicenter of the outbreak in China has decided to cut off its public transportation system starting at 10 AM on January 23rd local time.


With the recent outbreak of pneumonia due to the new coronavirus, Wuhan city, the epicenter of the outbreak in China, has decided to cut off its public transportation system starting at 10 AM local time on January 23rd local time.

With the recent outbreak of pneumonia due to the new coronavirus, Wuhan city, the epicenter of the outbreak in China, has decided to cut off its public transportation system starting at 10 AM on January 23rd local time.

You don't need to add city after Wuhan. Your title already informs the reader that Wuhan is a city.

This unusual measure is taken to restrict the public’s transportation to contain the spread of infection.


This unusual measure is being taken to restrict the public’s transportation in order to contain the spread of infection.

More natural: "This unusual measure to restrict the public's movements is being taken in the hope of preventing further spread of the infection."

This unusual measure ishas been taken to restrict the public’s transportation to contain the spread of infection.

Most of your entry is in present perfect tense, so this sentence should allow follow that pattern.

The World Health Organization conveyed a meeting at the Headquarters in Geneva in the afternoon of 22nd January local time regarding the new coronavirus, and have decided to further discuss preventive measures throughout the 23rd.


The World Health Organization conveyned a meeting about the Hnew coronavirus at its headquarters in Geneva ion the afternoon of 22nd January local time regarding the new coronavirus22nd, and haves decided to further discuss preventive measures throughout the 23rd.

The World Health Organization conveyned at a meeting at the Headquarters in Geneva in the afternoon of 22nd January 22nd, local time, regarding the new coronavirus, and have decided to further discuss preventive measures throughout the 23rd.

There should only be a comma before and if the following line is a complete sentence. Correct Example: I am hungry, and I will make pancakes for breakfast. Incorrect Example: I am hungry, and will make pancakes for breakfast.

According to the Chinese state media, Wuhan City will be shutting off intercity busses, subways as well as closing down railway stations and airports.


According to the Chinese state media, Wuhan City will be shutting off intercity busses, and subways, as well as closing down railway stations and airports.

According to the Chinese state media, Wuhan City will be shutting off intercity busses, and subways, as well as closing down railway stations and airports.

Civilians are banned from leaving the city unless “under special circumstances”. The release of a seal-off is to be announced. Wuhan City is a metropolis with a population of over 10 million people. The death toll from the new coronavirus reached 17 people as of Wednesday. So far, coronavirus has infected more than 500 people including patients in China, Japan, the U.S., South Korea, Thailand and Taiwan. The World Health Organization discussed whether to announce a global health emergency regarding the epidemic of the new coronavirus at an emergency meeting held on 22nd January. However, they postponed their decision for further discussion on 23rd.


Civilians are banned from leaving the city unlessexcept “under special circumstances”. The release of a seal-off isA quarantine(?) is expected to be announced. Wuhan City is a metropolis with a population of over 10 million people.
The death toll
ofrom the new coronavirus reached 17 people as of Wednesday. So far, the coronavirus has infected more than 500 people, including patients in China, Japan, the U.S., South Korea, Thailand, and Taiwan.
The World Health Organization
, at an emergency meeting held on January 22nd, discussed whether to announce a global health emergency regardinglated to the epidemic of the new coronavirus at an emergency meeting held on 22nd January. However, they postponed their decision forpending further discussion on the 23rd.

Civilians are banned from leaving the city unless it is “under special circumstances”. The release of a.” A seal-off is to be announced. Wuhan City is a metropolis with a population of over 10 million people.

The death toll from the new coronavirus reached 17 people as of Wednesday. So far, coronavirus has infected more than 500 people including patients in China, Japan, the U.S., South Korea, Thailand and Taiwan.


The World Health Organization discussed whether to announce a global health emergency regarding the epidemic of the new coronavirus at an emergency meeting held on 22nd January. However, they postponed their decision for further discussion on 23rd.

It sounds a bit awkward to say "release of a seal-off." Instead, you can just say that a seal-off will be announced.

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