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Actually I am working in finances but someday I will be driving my car around the world driving my car,and readying a lot of books. Actually I am working in finance but someday I will be driving my car around the world and reading a lot of books.

"will" could be "want to" or "plan to"

Actually IRight now, I am working in finances but s. Someday, I will behope to be traveling around the world, driving my car, and readying a lot of books. Right now, I am working in finance. Someday, I hope to be traveling around the world, driving my car and reading a lot of books.

I divided this sentence into two separate ones.

Actually IRight now, I am working in finances, but someday I will be driving my car around the world driving my car,and readying a lot of books. Right now, I am working in finances, but someday I will be driving my car around the world and reading a lot of books.

Right now means in this moment or currently and is a better word to use in this sentence. Most english speakers use actual to say real

ActualCurrently, I working in finances, but someday I will be traveling around the world, driving my car, and readying a lot of books. Currently, I work in finance, but someday I will be traveling around the world, driving my car, and reading a lot of books.

I want to meet nice people and see many animals. I want to meet nice people and see many animals.

Sounds more natural to say see many animals instead of meet. Meet is used when talking about people

My favorite country is Italia,y. I went to there the last year and I want to go back. My favorite country is Italy. I went to there the last year and I want to go back.

My favorite country is Italiay, I went to there thhere last year and I want to go back (there). My favorite country is Italy, I went there last year and I want to go back (there).

Italia in English is Italy. What about Italy did you love?

My favorite country is Italia, I went to there the last year and I want to go back. My favorite country is Italia, I went there the last year and I want to go back.

My favorite country is Italia,y. I went to there the last year, and I want to go back. My favorite country is Italy. I went there last year, and I want to go back.

My dream sSince I was a little girl , I've always dreamed of traveling. Since I was a little girl, I've always dreamed of traveling.

My dream sSince I was a little girl, my dream was to traveling. Since I was a little girl, my dream was to travel.

My dream since I was a little girl whas been to traveling. My dream since I was a little girl has been to travel.