I hadve acheieved themy first succeded in myss in life.

FI finally I have 10k followers on Tiktok.

or,

Finally, I have 10k followers on Tiktok.

Congratulations!

I worked very hard day and night to acheieve my goal.

Here's a mnemonic we use in the US to remember "ie" and "ei" spellings: "I before E except after C and when sounded as "a" as in "neighbor" and "weigh." There are other exceptions like leisure and seizure but the mnemonic is good for about 98% of "ie" and "ei" spelled words.

Praise to bebe to God.

This is not standard English grammar. I would think of this as a set phrase.

I had a friend who called theme a failure but since 2017 I have become known to beas a woman who is more confident so today I can say I am proud of myself!

Good for you!

Again, praise to bebe to God!

I had acheivsucceeded the first succeded in my life.

I'm sure you succeeded in other things. Don't be so negative/self-critical.

Finally , I have 10k followers on TiktTok.

I worked very hard every day and night to acheieve my goal.

Praise to be God.

This sentence feels out of place.

I had a friend that called theme a failure, but since 2017 I known to be a womanI'm a more confident sowoman today compared to the past. I can say I am proud of myself!

Yes, tThe door of success is open to me, so I can enter.

Again pPraised to be God!

The way you are writing it makes it seem as if you are God. Is this your intention?