Writing: The Unequal Coverage Of Male And Female Athletes

The inequality between men'sale and women'sfemale athletes in broadcasting comes mainly come from unequal benefits brought to the media.

The main revenue of the mediaedia's main source of revenue is from advertising and sponsorships.

So theBecause of this, media coverage is geared towards what the public wants.

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Two main arguments are front ofand center: one, that. One; sports media is dominated by men, and therefore their scope of what they find appealing is limited.

And two, that; women's sports simply don't generate enough interest to warrant more coverage.

Sports played by men get the lion's share of attention from the public.

I've never heard of this expression, though it makes sense.

And There lies the problem.

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It's a vicious circle: sponsorship depends on TV coverage; the TV stations say they don't show to broadcast women's sport because it doesn't receive the audiences attention; and the audiences ask how they're supposed to watch women's sport when nobody will broadcast it.

So kKnowing how to break this cycle is the key to significant development.