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TITLE: -explain which factor you think is more important to consider when choosing a first job, giving reasons for your opinion-

Hi, today I going to explain the most important things to consider when you choose your first job. First of all is important to understand if this job is really useful for your future; In fact sometimes the first job is something that we do to earn the first money o maybe only to do something. Obviously is really important create experience and know new people in the "work area" but if you have many possibility, choose the one that can be useful for your future job. If you find your type of job that you want to do; I suggest to consider this steps to understand if this job is good for you:
1. Ask to yourself this question: This job will create me happiness? If the answer is "I don't know" or "probably no" maybe you have to consider to look somewhere else job...
2. Consider the distance: If this job is too far away maybe you have to consider the fact that would be difficult to go every time there, even for your wallet...
3. Know the other people opinion about that job: If your friend or maybe other people tell you that type of job is too difficult or not worth it; consider to look for another job...
In conclusion I want to say to be chill about your future first job and try to be too selective, because in the future you will have a thousand other possibility to choose. I hope this essay will be useful for everyone. Bye Bye!

TITOLO: -Spiega quale fattore ritieni più importante da considerare nella scelta del primo lavoro, motivando la tua opinione-

Ciao, oggi ti spiegherò gli aspetti più importanti da considerare nella scelta del tuo primo lavoro. Prima di tutto, è importante capire se questo lavoro è davvero utile per il tuo futuro; a volte, infatti, il primo lavoro è qualcosa che facciamo per guadagnare i primi soldi o magari solo per fare qualcosa. Ovviamente è molto importante fare esperienza e conoscere nuove persone nel "settore lavorativo", ma se hai molte possibilità, scegli quella che può essere utile per il tuo futuro lavoro. Se trovi il tipo di lavoro che desideri fare, ti consiglio di considerare questi passaggi per capire se questo lavoro è adatto a te:
1. Chiediti: questo lavoro mi renderà felice? Se la risposta è "Non lo so" o "Probabilmente no", forse dovresti considerare di cercare un altro lavoro...
2. Considera la distanza: se questo lavoro è troppo lontano, forse dovresti considerare il fatto che sarebbe difficile andarci ogni volta, anche per il tuo portafoglio...
3. Conosci l'opinione degli altri su quel lavoro: se un tuo amico o altre persone ti dicono che quel tipo di lavoro è troppo difficile o non ne vale la pena, considera di cercarne un altro...
In conclusione, vorrei dirti di essere tranquillo riguardo al tuo futuro primo lavoro e di cercare di essere molto selettivo, perché in futuro avrai mille altre possibilità tra cui scegliere. Spero che questo saggio sia utile a tutti. Ciao!

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TITLE: -eExplain which factor you think is more important to consider when choosing a first job, giving reasons for your opinion- ¶
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Hi, today I am going to explain the most important things to consider when you are chooseing your first job.

First of all, it is important to understand if this job is really useful for your future; In fact s. Sometimes theour first job is something that we do to earn the first money o maybe only to do something.for the sake of earning money.

Obviously is really important create, experience and knowing new people in the "work area"s important but if you have many possibility,ies, you should choose the one that can beis the most useful for your future job.

If you find yourthe type of job that you want to do;, I suggest to consider this stepse following to understand if this job is good for you:
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Ask to yourself this question: TWill this job will creatgive me happiness?

If the answer is "I don't know" or "probably no" maybe youno", you probably have to consider to look somewhere elseing for another job...
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Consider the distance: Iif this job is too far away maybe, you have to consider the fact that would be difficult to go there every time there, even, for your wallet...
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Know the other people's opinions about thate job: Iif your friend or maybe other people tell you that type ofhe job is too difficult or not worth it;, consider to looking for another job...

In conclusion I want to say to be chill, be relaxed about your future first job and try not to be too selective, because in the future you will have a thousandseveral other possibility to chooseies.

I hope this essay willcan be useful for everyone.

Bye Bbye!

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TITLE: -explain which factor you think is more important to consider when choosing a first job, giving reasons for your opinion-


Hi, today I'm going to explain the most important things to consider when you choose your first job.

First of all, it's important to understand if this job is really useful for your future; In fact sometimes the, your first job is something that weyou do to earn theyour first moneywage or maybe onlyjust to do something.

Obviously, it's really important createto gain experience and knownetwork with new people in the "work area" but, if you have many possibilityies, choose the one that can bewould be the most useful for your future job.

If you find yourthe type of job that you want to do;, I suggest to consider thisese steps to understand if this job is good for you:
1.

Ask to yourself this question: TWill this job will creatmake me happinessy?

If the answer is "I don't know" or "probably not" maybe you haveyou may need to reconsider to look somewhere elseing for another job...
2.

Consider the distance: If this job is too far away, maybe you haveneed to reconsider the fact that it would be difficult to go there every time there, even, especially for your wallet...
3.

Know the other people's opinions about that job: If your friend or maybe other people tell you that this type of job is too difficult or not worth it;, consider to looking for another job...

In conclusion, I want to say to be chill about your future first job and t. Try to be too selective, because in the future you will have a thousand other possibilityies to choose. from.

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Awesome job! Your English is amazing and most the things I changed were just to make it sound more natural as how a native speaker would say it. Well done!

Writing test level C1 English Cambridge

Obviously is really important create experience and know new people in the "work area" but if you have many possibility, choose the one that can be useful for your future job.

Obviously, it's really important createto gain experience and knownetwork with new people in the "work area" but, if you have many possibilityies, choose the one that can bewould be the most useful for your future job.

Obviously is really important create, experience and knowing new people in the "work area"s important but if you have many possibility,ies, you should choose the one that can beis the most useful for your future job.

I hope this essay will be useful for everyone.

I hope this essay willcan be useful for everyone.

TITLE: -explain which factor you think is more important to consider when choosing a first job, giving reasons for your opinion- Hi, today I going to explain the most important things to consider when you choose your first job.

TITLE: -explain which factor you think is more important to consider when choosing a first job, giving reasons for your opinion-


Hi, today I'm going to explain the most important things to consider when you choose your first job.

TITLE: -eExplain which factor you think is more important to consider when choosing a first job, giving reasons for your opinion- ¶
.¶

Hi, today I am going to explain the most important things to consider when you are chooseing your first job.

First of all is important to understand if this job is really useful for your future; In fact sometimes the first job is something that we do to earn the first money o maybe only to do something.

First of all, it's important to understand if this job is really useful for your future; In fact sometimes the, your first job is something that weyou do to earn theyour first moneywage or maybe onlyjust to do something.

First of all, it is important to understand if this job is really useful for your future; In fact s. Sometimes theour first job is something that we do to earn the first money o maybe only to do something.for the sake of earning money.

If you find your type of job that you want to do; I suggest to consider this steps to understand if this job is good for you: 1.

If you find yourthe type of job that you want to do;, I suggest to consider thisese steps to understand if this job is good for you:
1.

If you find yourthe type of job that you want to do;, I suggest to consider this stepse following to understand if this job is good for you:
1.

Ask to yourself this question: This job will create me happiness?

Ask to yourself this question: TWill this job will creatmake me happinessy?

Ask to yourself this question: TWill this job will creatgive me happiness?

If the answer is "I don't know" or "probably no" maybe you have to consider to look somewhere else job... 2.

If the answer is "I don't know" or "probably not" maybe you haveyou may need to reconsider to look somewhere elseing for another job...
2.

If the answer is "I don't know" or "probably no" maybe youno", you probably have to consider to look somewhere elseing for another job...
2.

Consider the distance: If this job is too far away maybe you have to consider the fact that would be difficult to go every time there, even for your wallet... 3.

Consider the distance: If this job is too far away, maybe you haveneed to reconsider the fact that it would be difficult to go there every time there, even, especially for your wallet...
3.

Consider the distance: Iif this job is too far away maybe, you have to consider the fact that would be difficult to go there every time there, even, for your wallet...
3.

Know the other people opinion about that job: If your friend or maybe other people tell you that type of job is too difficult or not worth it; consider to look for another job...

Know the other people's opinions about that job: If your friend or maybe other people tell you that this type of job is too difficult or not worth it;, consider to looking for another job...

Know the other people's opinions about thate job: Iif your friend or maybe other people tell you that type ofhe job is too difficult or not worth it;, consider to looking for another job...

In conclusion I want to say to be chill about your future first job and try to be too selective, because in the future you will have a thousand other possibility to choose.

In conclusion, I want to say to be chill about your future first job and t. Try to be too selective, because in the future you will have a thousand other possibilityies to choose. from.

In conclusion I want to say to be chill, be relaxed about your future first job and try not to be too selective, because in the future you will have a thousandseveral other possibility to chooseies.

Bye Bye!

Bye Bbye!

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