Nov. 16, 2023
writing task 2
Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Children are the future of a nation, so their education and development are of great concern to society. Some people assert that parents should be responsible for educating their children to become good citizens, while others argue it is the role of schools, to which I agree.
Admittedly, school plays an important role in educating children to become responsible citizens. To facilitate a learning environment, schools have to establish a set of rules, and students are taught to strictly adhere to these rules. This promotes the characteristics necessary for good citizenship such as self-discipline and obedience. Furthermore, the school is a miniature society with people from various backgrounds. Through interacting with their peers and participating in teamwork activities, students can build up interpersonal skills that make them good members of society.
However, parents have a more profound influence. First, they lay the foundations for their children’s behavior by teaching them the differences between right and wrong and guiding the children to behave accordingly. For example, kids are taught at home to learn proper table manners and be polite to their grandparents. Second, young individuals by nature mimic people around them, and they typically spend most of their time with their mothers and fathers. Therefore, parents can model behaviour that embodies good character traits, and their kids are likely to learn from it.
In conclusion, while school can teach children to obey the rules and develop collaborative social skills, parents can instill in children the basics of good behaviour and be good role models for them. Hence, homes are the better place for nurturing children into good members of society.
writing task 2
Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.
Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Children are the future of a nation, so their education and development are of great concern to society.
Some people assert that parents should be responsible for educating their children to become good citizens, while others argue that it is the role ofesponsibility of the schools, to which I agree.
Admittedly, school plays an important role in educating children to become responsible citizens.
To facilitate a learning environment, schools have to establish a set of rules, and students are taught to strictly adhere to these rules.
This promotes the characteristicvalues necessary for good citizenship/members of society such as self-discipline and obedience.
Furthermore, the school is a type of miniature society with people from various backgrounds.
Through interacting with their peers and participating in teamwork activities, students can build up interpersonal skills that make them good members of society.
However, parents have a more profound influence.
First, they lay the foundations for their children’s behavior by teaching them the differences between right and wrong and guiding the/their children to behave accordingly.
For example, kids are taught at home to learn proper table manners and be polite to their grandparents.
Second, young individuals by nature mimically imitate the people around them, and tend to/they typically spend most of their time with their mothers and fatherparents.
Second, young individuals naturally imitate the people around them and tend to spend most of their time with their parents.
Therefore, parents can model behaviour that embodies good character traits, and their kids are likely to learn from it.
In conclusion, while school can teach children to obey the rules and develop collaborative social skills, parents can instill in children the basics of good behaviour and be good role models for them.
In conclusion, while school can teach children to obey rules and develop collaborative social skills, parents can instill in them the basic principles of good behavior and be good role models for them.
Hence, homes are the better place for nurturing children into good members of society.
You can also say: "Hence, homes are the best place to raise children and turn them into good members of society."
Nov. 28, 2023
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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Children are the future of a nation, so their education and development are of great concern to society. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Some people assert that parents should be responsible for educating their children to become good citizens, while others argue it is the role of schools, to which I agree. Some people assert that parents should be responsible for educating their children to become good citizens, while others argue that it is the r |
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Admittedly, school plays an important role in educating children to become responsible citizens. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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To facilitate a learning environment, schools have to establish a set of rules, and students are taught to strictly adhere to these rules. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This promotes the characteristics necessary for good citizenship such as self-discipline and obedience. This promotes the |
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Furthermore, the school is a miniature society with people from various backgrounds. Furthermore, the school is a type of miniature society with people from various backgrounds. |
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Through interacting with their peers and participating in teamwork activities, students can build up interpersonal skills that make them good members of society. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, parents have a more profound influence. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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First, they lay the foundations for their children’s behavior by teaching them the differences between right and wrong and guiding the children to behave accordingly. First, they lay the foundations for their children’s behavior by teaching them the difference |
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For example, kids are taught at home to learn proper table manners and be polite to their grandparents. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Second, young individuals by nature mimic people around them, and they typically spend most of their time with their mothers and fathers. Second, young individuals Second, young individuals naturally imitate the people around them and tend to spend most of their time with their parents. |
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Therefore, parents can model behaviour that embodies good character traits, and their kids are likely to learn from it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In conclusion, while school can teach children to obey the rules and develop collaborative social skills, parents can instill in children the basics of good behaviour and be good role models for them. In conclusion, while school can teach children to obey the rules and develop collaborative social skills, parents can instill in children the basics of good behaviour and be good role models for them. In conclusion, while school can teach children to obey rules and develop collaborative social skills, parents can instill in them the basic principles of good behavior and be good role models for them. |
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Hence, homes are the better place for nurturing children into good members of society. Hence, homes are the better place for nurturing children into good members of society. You can also say: "Hence, homes are the best place to raise children and turn them into good members of society." |
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