May 18, 2020
Writing practice: covid-19
Covid-19 has ravaged countries around the world. The death rate is particularly high in some countries partly because the virus has cut a swathe through nursing homes, many of which lack medical stuff and staff.
Employees in hotspot regions have been cooped up in their houses. Unable to work from home, some are sacked by employers on the brink of bankruptcy. In some countries like US, its labour laws have given employers leave to cull jobs. Others employees are furloughed, being put on unpaid leave.
Some industries have too many workers, whereas others do not have enough. To keep the labour market relatively fluid, some firms encourage their inactive workers to switch jobs to fill temporary vacancies in other industries. Amid a shortage of migrant labour, airline employees are needed to work in hospitals; and rural bar staff could do some farmwork, switching from pulling pints to pulling up potatoes. Industries with such a scheme could reap the harvest because as social-distancing measures recede and the disease-specific demand ebbs workers can return to their old jobs quickly and firms do not need to suffer the ordeal of rehiring.
Writing practice: cCovid-19
The death rate is particularly high in some countries partly because the virus has cut a swathe through nursing homes, many of which lack medical stuffupplies and staff.
As a general rule, avoid using the word "stuff" on any kind of text, unless it's very informal. It's use here is correct, however it detracts from the overall aesthetic value.
Employees in hotspot regions have been cooped up in their housmes.
In some countries like the US, itsthe labour laws have given employers leave to cull jobs.
Industries with such a scheme could reap the harvest because as social-distancing measures recede and the disease-specific demand ebbs, workers can return to their old jobs quickly and firms do not need to suffer the ordeal of rehiring.
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Wow this is extremely well written. Looks pretty much like something a native would write. Congrats!
May 18, 2020
Oh sorry for those mistakes I should have avoided! And thank you very much for the kind help and the sweet words. ♥ Very much appreciated!
Writing practice: covid-19
Covid-19 has ravaged countries around the world.
The death rate is particularly high in some countries partly because the virus has cut a swathe through nursing homes, many of which lack medical stuffupplies and staff.
Stuff isn't wrong, it's that supplies sounds more natural to me.
Employees in hotspot regions have been cooped up in their houses.
Unable to work from home, some are sacked by employers on the brink of bankruptcy.
In some countries, like the US, itsthe labour laws have givenallowed employers leave to cull jobs.
Others employees are furloughed, being put on unpaid leave.
Some industries have too many workers, whereas others do not have enough.
To keep the labour market relatively fluid, some firms encourage their inactive workers to switch jobs to fill temporary vacancies in other industries.
Amid a shortage of migrant labour, airline employees are needed to work in hospitals; and rural bar staff could do some farmwork, switching from pulling pints to pulling up potatoes.
Industries with such a scheme could reap the harvest because as social-distancing measures recede and the disease-specific demand ebbs, workers can return to their old jobs quickly and firms do not need to suffer the ordeal of rehiring.
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"Switching from pulling pints to pulling up potatoes" is a fantastic phrase.
May 20, 2020
Thank you very much for the help! O(∩_∩)O
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Covid-19 has ravaged countries around the world. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The death rate is particularly high in some countries partly because the virus has cut a swathe through nursing homes, many of which lack medical stuff and staff. The death rate is particularly high in some countries partly because the virus has cut a swathe through nursing homes, many of which lack medical s Stuff isn't wrong, it's that supplies sounds more natural to me. The death rate is particularly high in some countries partly because the virus has cut a swathe through nursing homes, many of which lack medical s As a general rule, avoid using the word "stuff" on any kind of text, unless it's very informal. It's use here is correct, however it detracts from the overall aesthetic value. |
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Employees in hotspot regions have been cooped up in their houses. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Employees in hotspot regions have been cooped up in their ho |
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Unable to go to work, some are sacked by employers on the brink of bankruptcy. |
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In some countries like US, its labour laws have given employers leave to cull jobs. In some countries, like the US, In some countries like the US, |
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Others employees are furloughed, being put on unpaid leave. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Some industries have too many workers, whereas others do not have enough. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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To keep the labour market relatively fluid, some firms encourage their inactive workers to switch jobs to fill temporary vacancies in other industries. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Amid a shortage of migrant labour, airline employees are needed to work in hospitals; and rural bar staff could do some farmwork, switching from pulling pints to pulling up potatoes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Industries with such a scheme could reap the harvest because as social-distancing measures recede and the disease-specific demand ebbs workers can return to their old jobs quickly and firms do not need to suffer the ordeal of rehiring. Industries with such a scheme could reap the harvest because as social-distancing measures recede and the disease-specific demand ebbs, workers can return to their old jobs quickly and firms do not need to suffer the ordeal of rehiring. Industries with such a scheme could reap the harvest because as social-distancing measures recede and the disease-specific demand ebbs, workers can return to their old jobs quickly and firms do not need to suffer the ordeal of rehiring. |
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Unable to work from home, some are sacked by employers on the brink of bankruptcy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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