Jan. 12, 2022
I have to declare first that I have never gotten a mental illness, but I can give some thoughts about this topic.
We can see many people having mental problems at any gender and at any age. It's both really sad for them and us.
I am not a medical worker, so I don't really know the reason which caused these problems, but I guess if it's not caused by brain tissues, it is mostly caused by people's mentality.
If people are open minded, kind, friendly and generous, they hardly seem to get mental illness, otherwise, they are easy to.
So, the best way to avoid getting mental illness is to build a strong mental power and be open minded to everything.
Additionally, giving is always happier than taking and I think it's another good method to keep from mental illness.
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Good writing overall. I don't really agree with your opinion, but it's interesting to see other peoples' ideas on this topic :)
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I have to declare first that I have never gotten a mental illness, but I can give some thoughts about this topic. I have to declare first that I have never I feel like "had" is better than "gotten" here since to me, "getting" an illness is more related to getting infected with an illness that spread from someone else (a cold, the flu, etc.) while "having" an illness is more suitable for things that develop over time and are not caught from other people (autoimmune diseases, mental illness, etc.). Other native speakers might disagree. |
We can see many people having mental problems at any gender and at any age. We can see many people |
It's both really sad for them and us. It's |
I am not a medical worker, so I don't really know the reason which caused these problems, but I guess if it's not caused by brain tissues, it is mostly caused by people's mentality. I am not a medical worker, so I don't really know |
If people are open minded, kind, friendly and generous, they hardly seem to get mental illness, otherwise, they are easy to.
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So, the best way to avoid getting mental illness is to build a strong mental power and be open minded to everything. So, the best way to avoid |
Additionally, giving is always happier than taking and I think it's another good method to keep from mental illness. Additionally, giving |
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