June 22, 2020
Writing Practice
今天是我的生日。我今天下午五点睡觉的时候，我朋友来我的家。下午六点我和我朋友都已经在我的家。菜很多。菜都是我妈妈朋友的，我帮我妈妈。菜都很好吃，咖啡和茶都很好喝。我的生日是很快乐。
Writing Practice
今天是我的生日。
我今天下午五点睡觉的时候，我朋友来我的家。
下午六点我和我朋友都已经在我的家。
菜很多。
菜都是我妈妈朋友的，做的。我帮我妈妈(…)。
The sentence seems incomplete to me.
菜都又很好吃，咖啡和茶都又很好喝。
又 makes more sense to me as there is some sort of parallel structure.
我的生日是很快乐。
Feedback
Fairly accurate, though some stylistic adjustments would be beneficial.
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Writing Practice This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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今天是我的生日。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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我今天下午五点睡觉的时候，我朋友来我的家。 我今天下午五点睡觉的时候，我朋友来我 |
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下午六点我和我朋友都已经在我的家。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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菜很多。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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菜都是我妈妈朋友的，我帮我妈妈。 菜 The sentence seems incomplete to me. 菜都是我妈妈朋友做的，我帮我妈妈。 |
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菜都很好吃，咖啡和茶都很好喝。 菜 又 makes more sense to me as there is some sort of parallel structure. |
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我的生日是很快乐。 我的生日 我的生日 |
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