March 30, 2024
Writing exercise
This exercise consisted on writing about an experience (it can be positive, saddening, annoying, calming) and denoting it with a different emotion.
Experiencie: Having a nice day with my family.
I'd wish it could last forever. Their smooth voices resounding in my head made me feel comfortable, but the time flowed so fast that I didn't realize when I had to go. Now, I can only evoque a nostalgic smile when I think about it.
Writing exercise
This exercise consisted on writing about an experience (it can be positive, saddening, annoying, calming) and denoting it with a different emotion.
Experiencie: Having a nice day with my family.
I'd wish it could last forever.
Their smooth voices resoundechoing in my head made me feel comfortable, but the time flowed so fast that I didn't realize when I had to go.
Now, I can only evoque a nostalgic smile when I think about it.
April 15, 2024
Thank you!!
This exercise consisted onf writing about an experience (it can be positive, saddening, annoying, calming) and denoting it with a different with an emotion.
Their smooth voices resoundinged in my head made me feel comfortable, but the time flowpassed so fast that I didn't realize when I had to go.
this should be in the past tense
Now, I can only evoqueremember (?) the day with a nostalgic smile when I think about it.
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review the tenses. it should mainly be in the past tense.
April 15, 2024
Thank you very much!
This exercise consisted onf writing about an experience (it can be positive, saddening, annoying, calming) and denoting it with a different emotion.
Experiencie: Having a nice day with my family.
I'd wished it could last forever.
Now, I can only evoque a nostalgic smile when I think about it.
This is a nice sentence if a bit poetic
April 15, 2024
Thank you so much!
This exercise consisted on writing about an experience (it can be positive, saddening, annoying, calming) and denoting it with a different emotion.
Experiencie: Having a nice day with my family.
I'd wish it could have lasted forever.
Their smooth voices resounding in my head made me feel comfortable, but the time flowedwent by so fast that I didn't realize when I had to go.
You could also say "but time had flown so quickly I didn't realize when I had to leave"
Now, I can only evoquke a nostalgic smile when I think aboutever I look back upon it.
"look back upon" sounds more poetic :D
Feedback
Family are some of the most important people to us. Even if the friends we make come and go, the bonds we share with our family are ever-lasting, and I think that's something that we - whose lifespans aren't nearly long enough - don't cherish enough in the short time we have together. I'm glad you were able to enjoy some quality time with your family
April 15, 2024
Totally agree! Thank you so much ^^
Writing exercise
This exercise consisted onf writing about an experience (it can be positive, saddening, annoying, calming) and denoting it with a different emotion.
Experiencie: Having a nice day with my family.
I'd wish it could last forever.
Their smooth voices resounding in my head made me feel comfortable, but the time flowedew so fast that I didn't realize when I had to go.
Now, I can only evoque asmile from nostalgic smilea when I think about it.
I think you meant "evoke" but it doesn't make much sense here
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Nice!
April 15, 2024
Thank you!!!
Writing eExercise
This exercise consisted on writing about an experience (it can be positive, saddening, annoying, or calming) and denoting it with a different emotion.
Experiencie: Having a nice day with my family.
I'd wish it could last forever.
Their smooth voices resounding in my head made me feel comfortable, but the time flowed so fast that I didn't realize when I had to go.
Now, I can only evoque a nostalgic smile when I think about it.
April 15, 2024
Thanks!! Have a nice day!
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