Writing Challenge, Day 89 Writing Challenge, Day 89

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Tomorrow, I will recieve (a visit from) my nephew and nieces. Tomorrow, I will recieve (a visit from) my nephew and nieces.

This is a correct way to say this but it is not very common to phrase it this way. Another way is "Tomorrow, my nephew and nieces will visit me" or "Tomorrow, I will be visited by my nephew and nieces"

Tomorrow I will recievsee my nephew and nieces. Tomorrow I will see my nephew and nieces.

Remember, in the US, we don't receive guests if they're our family and friends. We use "receive" more for people we don't really know. Also, it's fallen out of use.

Tomorrow I will recieve my nephew and nieces (where?-at your house?). Tomorrow I will recieve my nephew and nieces (where?-at your house?).

Tomorrow my mother, nephew and nieces will be coming atin the evening. Tomorrow my mother, nephew and nieces will be coming in the evening.

This option sounds more natural. You could add "will be coming to my place in the evening" for more detail.

Tomorrow evening my mother, nephew and nieces will be coming at evening. Tomorrow evening my mother, nephew and nieces will be coming.

This sounds more natural in the US.

Tomorrow my mother, nephew and nieces will be coming atin the evening. Tomorrow my mother, nephew and nieces will be coming in the evening.