Jan. 8, 2023
Writing Challenge, Day 99
Today is Day 99 of my daily English challenge. I was very happy to review my English and Spanish lessons. I also read some of my corrections texts in this site. Then I canceled my appointment with a friend over Skype because I have a toothache and I should to go to the dentist tomorrow.
In the afternoon, I read some pages of a book in arabic and in french. I am so delighted what I did today. I made my day!
Writing Challenge, Day 99
Today is Day 99 of my daily English challenge.
I was very happy to review my English and Spanish lessons.
I also read some of my corrections texts ion this site.
Adjectives aren't plural.
"in this site" is definitely understandable, but it sounds better if "on this site" is used.
Then I canceled my appointment with a friend over Skype because I have a toothache and I shoulneed to go to the dentist tomorrow.
Need sounds better here, probably since you are definitely going.
In the afternoon, I read some pages of a book in aArabic and in fFrench.
Proper nouns are capitalized.
I am so delighted what I didbecause of what I have done today.
"I am so delighted" and "what I have done today" need to be connected.
Since today is still happening, it's better to use "what I have done today". If you were talking about yesterday, you'd say "what I did yesterday".
I made my dayMy day was great!
Don't think "I made my day" is proper use of the idiom. Additionally, the idiom means "My day was great because of (person)", so not sure if it fits in this context.
Feedback
Nice job! Good vocab and mistakes were minor.
Writing Challenge, Day 99
Today is Day 99 of my daily English challenge.
I was very happy to review my English and Spanish lessons.
In the afternoon, I read some pages of a book in arabic and in french.
I made my day!
Jan. 9, 2023
Hi I tried to correct the other sentences but for some reason the website isn't letting me. The other person was perfect with their corrections :)
Writing Challenge, Day 99
Today is Day 99 of my daily English challenge.
I was very happy to review my English and Spanish lessons.
I also read some of my corrections texts ion this site.
Then I canceled my appointment with a friend over Skype because I have a toothache and. I should to go to the dentist tomorrow.
This makes more sense to me in two sentences. You canceled the appointment because of the toothache and not because you have to go to the dentist tomorrow.
In the afternoon, I read some pages of a book in aArabic and in fFrench.
We capitalize the first letter of names of languages.
I am so delighted at what I did today.
You should be!
I made my day!
Feedback
Yes, you did! :) Good work!
Jan. 8, 2023
Thank you so much Mari๐๐
Jan. 8, 2023
You're very welcome! If you need something else to make your day even more awesome, Fernanhaiku credits both of us for resolving to write every day, too: https://langcorrect.com/journal/day-1-of-my-english-challenge/ ๐๐
Jan. 9, 2023
Oh my God! You're so kind to me ๐๐๐๐๐๐
Jan. 9, 2023
Oh my God! You're so kind to me ๐๐๐๐๐๐
I just wanted you to know. ๐๐๐๐๐๐
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Today is Day 99 of my daily English challenge. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I was very happy to review my English and Spanish lessons. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I also read some of my corrections texts in this site. I also read some of my corrections I also read some of my correction Adjectives aren't plural. "in this site" is definitely understandable, but it sounds better if "on this site" is used. |
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Then I canceled my appointment with a friend over Skype because I have a toothache and I should to go to the dentist tomorrow. Then I canceled my appointment with a friend over Skype because I have This makes more sense to me in two sentences. You canceled the appointment because of the toothache and not because you have to go to the dentist tomorrow. Then I canceled my appointment with a friend over Skype because I have Need sounds better here, probably since you are definitely going. |
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In the afternoon, I read some pages of a book in arabic and in french. In the afternoon, I read some pages of a book in We capitalize the first letter of names of languages. This sentence has been marked as perfect! In the afternoon, I read some pages of a book in Proper nouns are capitalized. |
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I am so delighted what I did today. I am so delighted at what I did today. You should be! I am so delighted "I am so delighted" and "what I have done today" need to be connected. Since today is still happening, it's better to use "what I have done today". If you were talking about yesterday, you'd say "what I did yesterday". |
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I made my day! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Don't think "I made my day" is proper use of the idiom. Additionally, the idiom means "My day was great because of (person)", so not sure if it fits in this context. |
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