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courageuse19

Jan. 5, 2023

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Writing challenge, Day 96

Today is the 96th day of my daily English challenge. At this moment, my mother, nieces and nephew are arriving at their home. Between yesterday and today my home is became silent. What a strange life! I miss the children...It's life. Sunday the children will be going to their school.

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Today is the 96th day of my daily English challenge.

At this moment, my mother, nieces and nephew are arriving back at their home.

Between yesterday and today my home is became silentMy home today is much more silent than yesterday.

What a strange life!

I miss the children...I but that's life.

Sunday, the children will be going to their school.

Writing cChallenge, Day 96

oops, typo

Today is the 96th day of my daily English challenge.

At this moment, my mother, nieces and nephew are arriving at their home.

Between yesterday and today my home ihas becaome silent.

ohh, I know your pain very well.

What a strange life!

I miss the children...It's life.

On Sunday the children will be going to their school.

Feedback

I'm glad you enjoyed the time you had with them. Here's to many more visits with them! Good work!

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courageuse19

Jan. 6, 2023

2

Thank you Mari for the best words...You''e kind with me!

Writing challenge, Day 96


Writing cChallenge, Day 96

oops, typo

Today is the 96th day of my daily English challenge.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

At this moment, my mother, nieces and nephew are arriving at their home.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

At this moment, my mother, nieces and nephew are arriving back at their home.

Between yesterday and today my home is became silent.


Between yesterday and today my home ihas becaome silent.

ohh, I know your pain very well.

Between yesterday and today my home is became silentMy home today is much more silent than yesterday.

What a strange life!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I miss the children...It's life.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I miss the children...I but that's life.

Sunday the children will be going to their school.


On Sunday the children will be going to their school.

Sunday, the children will be going to their school.

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