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courageuse19

Jan. 3, 2023

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Writing Challenge, Day 94

Today is the day 94th daily of my English challenge. Today I cooked pasta with milk, price with chicken and tacos all my nephew and nieces wanted at least my nephew said : No I do not eat tacos. I was really angry but I did not show it becuse he's a child.

It's not good to do all the dishes what he asked me and after that he said me no. Oh my God!

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Today is the day 94th daily of my daily English challenge.

Today I cooked pasta with milk, price(?) with chicken and tacos that all my nephew and nieces wanted a. At least my nephew said : No I do non't eat tacos.

Not sure what you mean by piece

'Don't' is more casual that 'do not'

I was really angry but I did not show it becuse he's a child.

It's not good to domake all the dishes wthat he asked me for and after that he said me no.have him say 'no' afterwards

Oh my God!

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This is a funny follow up to yesterday's challenge.

You tackled some more complex sentence structures here so good on challenging yourself !

Writing Challenge, Day 94

Today is the day 94th daily of my daily English challenge.

Today I cooked pasta with milk, priceasta with chicken and tacos which were all my nephew and nieces wanted at least. Then my nephew said : , "No, I do not eat tacos."

After you cooked what they wanted, "then" your nephew said ...

I was really angry but I did not show it becuse he's a child.

It's not good to dowhen I'm cooking all the dishes what he asked of me and after that he said me nothen for him to say, no, I don't eat that.

Oh, I'm sorry to hear this.

Oh, my God!

I agree!

Feedback

Hang in there! They'll grow up to be more responsible! Good work!

Writing Challenge, Day 94

Today is the day 94th daily of my English challenge.

Today I cooked pasta with milk, price with chicken and tacos for all my nephew and nieces wanted at leas. This is what I thought they wanted but my nephew said : No I do not eat tacos.

I'm not exactly sure what you are trying to say here so my correction could be a little off.

I was really angry but I did not show it becuse he's a child.

It's not good to do all the dishes wthat he asked me andto do after that he said me nono to me.

Oh my God!

Writing Challenge, Day 94


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Today is the day 94th daily of my English challenge.


Today is the day 94th daily of my English challenge.

Today is the day 94th daily of my daily English challenge.

Today is the day 94th daily of my daily English challenge.

Today I cooked pasta with milk, price with chicken and tacos all my nephew and nieces wanted at least my nephew said : No I do not eat tacos.


Today I cooked pasta with milk, price with chicken and tacos for all my nephew and nieces wanted at leas. This is what I thought they wanted but my nephew said : No I do not eat tacos.

I'm not exactly sure what you are trying to say here so my correction could be a little off.

Today I cooked pasta with milk, priceasta with chicken and tacos which were all my nephew and nieces wanted at least. Then my nephew said : , "No, I do not eat tacos."

After you cooked what they wanted, "then" your nephew said ...

Today I cooked pasta with milk, price(?) with chicken and tacos that all my nephew and nieces wanted a. At least my nephew said : No I do non't eat tacos.

Not sure what you mean by piece 'Don't' is more casual that 'do not'

I was really angry but I did not show it becuse he's a child.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's not good to do all the dishes what he asked me and after that he said me no.


It's not good to do all the dishes wthat he asked me andto do after that he said me nono to me.

It's not good to dowhen I'm cooking all the dishes what he asked of me and after that he said me nothen for him to say, no, I don't eat that.

Oh, I'm sorry to hear this.

It's not good to domake all the dishes wthat he asked me for and after that he said me no.have him say 'no' afterwards

Oh my God!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Oh, my God!

I agree!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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