Jan. 2, 2023
Writing Challenge, Day 93
Today is the 93rd day of my daily English challenge. I have prepared my goals for this new year and I want to achieve all the goals.
I cooked everything that my nephew and nieces asked me to do. In a few minutes I wrote the menu of tomorrow. They asked me to cook for thier : Tacos for my nephew, Rice with chicken for my older niece and last she asked me to cook for her pasta with milk.😄😂Strange recipe! They are children whose wishes I will respect.
They asked me to cook for thier em: Tacos for my nephew, Rice with chicken for my older niece and at last / finally she asked me to cook for her pasta with milk for her .😄😂Strange recipe!
Their = belonging to them
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You will be a role model for them. Good job on finishing another daily challenge
Writing Challenge, Day 93
Today is the 93rd day of my daily English challenge.
I have prepared my goals for this new year and I want to achieve all the goalsof them.
I cooked everything that my nephew and nieces asked me to do.
In a few minutes I wrote the menu ofor tomorrow.
They asked me to cook for thier : Tacos for my nephew, Rrice with chicken for my older niece and last shmy younger niece asked me to cook for her pasta with milk.😄😂Strange recipe!
The meaning of what you have written is easily able to be understood. The changes made have improved the style so it looks and reads more naturally.
They are children whose wishes I will respect.
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Your writing is very good. There are only a few errors.
Writing Challenge, Day 93
Today is the 93rd day of my daily English challenge.
I have prepared my goals for this new year and I want to achieve all the goals.
I cooked everything that my nephew and nieces asked me to do.
In a few minutes I wrote the menu of tomorrow's menu.
They asked me to cook for thier : Tacos, for my nephew, R; rice with chicken, for my older niece; and last of all she asked me to cook for her pasta with milk.😄😂S for her.😄😂 A strange recipe!
They are children whose wishes I will respect.
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Very good, keep it up!
Writing Challenge, Day 93
Today is the 93rd day of my daily English challenge.
I have prepared my goals for this new year and I want to achieve all the goalsof them.
I cooked everything that my nephew and nieces asked me to docook.
In a few minutes I wroill write the menu ofor tomorrow.
This is future tense.
This is what they asked me to cook for thier : T: tacos for my nephew, Rrice with chicken for my older niece and last shmy younger niece asked me to cook for her pasta with milk.😄😂Strange recipe!
I've never heard of pasta with milk. I wonder where she heard about this.
They are children whose wishes I will respect.
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What a good Auntie! Good work!
Jan. 16, 2023
You're very kind to me. Thank you so much.
Writing Challenge, Day 93
Today is the 93rd day of my daily English challenge.
I want to achieve all the goals I have prepared my goals for this new year and I want to achieve all the goals.
I cooked everything that my nephew and nieces asked me to do.
In just a few minutes I wrote the menu of tomorrow's menu.
They asked me to cook for thier : Tacos for my nephew, Rice with chicken for my older niece and last she asked me to cook for her pasta with milk for her.😄😂Strange recipe!
Not sure what "thier" is. If you meant their, then them would be the correct pronoun in this sentence.
They are children whose wishes I will respect.
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They asked me to cook for thier : Tacos for my nephew, Rice with chicken for my older niece and last she asked me to cook for her pasta with milk.😄😂Strange recipe! They asked me to cook for thier : Tacos for my nephew, Rice with chicken for my older niece and last she asked me to cook Not sure what "thier" is. If you meant their, then them would be the correct pronoun in this sentence. This is what they asked me to cook I've never heard of pasta with milk. I wonder where she heard about this. They asked me to cook They asked me to cook The meaning of what you have written is easily able to be understood. The changes made have improved the style so it looks and reads more naturally. They asked me to cook for th Their = belonging to them |
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