Dec. 27, 2022
Writing Challenge, Day 87
Today is the 87th day of my daily English challenge. My sister called me today to let's me know, my mother, my nephew, and my nices will be coming on friday. They'll be staying with us in a few days. The children are so excited to come here!
My sister called me today to let's me know, that my mother, my nephew, and my nieces will be coming over on fFriday.
Dec. 28, 2022
Thank you.
Writing Challenge, Day 87
Today is the 87th day of my daily English challenge.
My sister called me today to let's me know, that my mother, my nephew, and my nieces will be coming on fFriday.
Nieces has an e. Friday is normally capitalised.
They'll be staying with us in a few days.
The children are so excited to come here!
Feedback
Very good!
Dec. 28, 2022
Thank you very much.
My sister called me today to let's me know, that my mother, my nephew, and my nieces will be coming on fFriday.
the use of "my" can be redundant/repetitive; "Friday" is a proper noun
They'll be staying with us in a few days.
Your sentence expresses that in a few days, they will have arrived and stay with you all.
If you meant to express how long (duration of time) they will be staying there - change "in" to "for" (They'll be staying with us for a few days.).
Feedback
Hope you have a time well spent with family!
Dec. 28, 2022
Thank you so much.
Writing Challenge, Day 87
Today is the 87th day of my daily English challenge.
My sister called me today to let's me know, that my mother, my nephew, and my nieces will be coming on fFriday.
or
My sister called me today to let me know that my mother, nephew, and nieces will be coming this Friday.
They'll be staying with us in a few days.
The children are so excited to come here!
Feedback
How cute and very well done!
Dec. 28, 2022
Thank you Mari.
|
Writing Challenge, Day 87 This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Today is the 87th day of my daily English challenge. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
My sister called me today to let's me know, my mother, my nephew, and my nices will be coming on friday. My sister called me today or My sister called me today to let me know that my mother, nephew, and nieces will be coming this Friday. My sister called me today the use of "my" can be redundant/repetitive; "Friday" is a proper noun My sister called me today Nieces has an e. Friday is normally capitalised. My sister called me today |
|
They'll be staying with us in a few days. This sentence has been marked as perfect! They'll be staying with us in a few days. Your sentence expresses that in a few days, they will have arrived and stay with you all. If you meant to express how long (duration of time) they will be staying there - change "in" to "for" (They'll be staying with us for a few days.). This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
The children are so excited to come here! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.
Go Premium