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Writing Challenge, Day 85

Today is the day 85th day of my daily English challenge. Yesterday I send all my friends card to celebrate Merry Christmas. I wanted to share with them, though we have not the same culture. I was delighted to do it!

Today I didn't do anything else, because I am in a pain and it's a strong. I juste cooked dinner to my sister.

When I haven't pain; I feel happy and I see the world pink, but when I am in a pain; I see the world black.

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Writing Challenge, Day 85

I was delighted to do it!

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Writing Challenge, Day 85


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Today is the day 85th day of my daily English challenge.


Today is the day 85th day of my daily English challenge. Today is the 85th day of my daily English challenge.

85th day! Congratulations, keep it up.

Today is the day 85th day of my daily English challenge. Today is the 85th day of my daily English challenge.

Repeated the word day, when you only needed one.

Today is the day 85th day of my daily English challenge. Today is the 85th day of my daily English challenge.

Yesterday I send all my friends card to celebrate Merry Christmas.


Yesterday I sendt all my friends card tos in celebrate Merryion of Christmas. Yesterday I sent all my friends cards in celebration of Christmas.

past tense

Yesterday I sendt all of my friends cards to celebrate Merry Christmas. Yesterday I sent all of my friends cards to celebrate Merry Christmas.

Cards should be plural, with an s, and the correct past tense form of send should be sent.

Yesterday I sendt all my friends cards to celebratewish them a Merry Christmas. Yesterday I sent all my friends cards to wish them a Merry Christmas.

send, sent, has sent

I wanted to share with them, though we have not the same culture.


I wanted to share with them, even though we havedo not have the same culture. I wanted to share with them, even though we do not have the same culture.

a bit more natural

I wanted to share the holidays with them, though we havedo not have the same culture. I wanted to share the holidays with them, though we do not have the same culture.

I was delighted to do it!


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Today I didn't do anything else, because I am in a pain and it's a strong.


Today I didn't do anything else, because I am in a pain and it's a strong. Today I didn't do anything else because I am in pain and it's strong.

sorry to hear that, hope you feel better soon!

Today I didn't do anything else, because I am in a pain and it's a strong. Today I didn't do anything else, because I am in pain and it's strong.

I'm sorry to hear this.

I juste cooked dinner to my sister.


I juste cooked dinner tofor my sister. I just cooked dinner for my sister.

preposition correction

I juste cooked dinner tofor my sister. I just cooked dinner for my sister.

When making something for someone, use the word for, not to.

I juste cooked dinner tofor my sister. I just cooked dinner for my sister.

or I just cooked dinner with my sister.

When I haven't pain; I feel happy and I see the world pink, but when I am in a pain; I see the world black.


When I don't haven't pain; I feel happy and I see the world in pink, but when I am in a pain; I see the world in black. When I don't have pain I feel happy and I see the world in pink, but when I am in a pain I see the world in black.

When I haven'tam not in pain;, I feel happy and I see the world as pink, but, when I am in a pain;, I see the world as black. When I am not in pain, I feel happy and I see the world as pink but, when I am in pain, I see the world as black.

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