Dec. 25, 2022
Writing Challenge, Day 85
Today is the day 85th day of my daily English challenge. Yesterday I send all my friends card to celebrate Merry Christmas. I wanted to share with them, though we have not the same culture. I was delighted to do it!
Today I didn't do anything else, because I am in a pain and it's a strong. I juste cooked dinner to my sister.
When I haven't pain; I feel happy and I see the world pink, but when I am in a pain; I see the world black.
Writing Challenge, Day 85
Today is the day 85th day of my daily English challenge.
Yesterday I sendt all my friends cards to celebratewish them a Merry Christmas.
send, sent, has sent
I wanted to share the holidays with them, though we havedo not have the same culture.
I was delighted to do it!
Today I didn't do anything else, because I am in a pain and it's a strong.
I'm sorry to hear this.
I juste cooked dinner tofor my sister.
or
I just cooked dinner with my sister.
When I haven'tam not in pain;, I feel happy and I see the world as pink, but, when I am in a pain;, I see the world as black.
Feedback
I hope you feel better soon! Merry Christmas and good work!
Today is the day 85th day of my daily English challenge.
Repeated the word day, when you only needed one.
Yesterday I sendt all of my friends cards to celebrate Merry Christmas.
Cards should be plural, with an s, and the correct past tense form of send should be sent.
I juste cooked dinner tofor my sister.
When making something for someone, use the word for, not to.
Today is the day 85th day of my daily English challenge.
85th day! Congratulations, keep it up.
Yesterday I sendt all my friends card tos in celebrate Merryion of Christmas.
past tense
I wanted to share with them, even though we havedo not have the same culture.
a bit more natural
Today I didn't do anything else, because I am in a pain and it's a strong.
sorry to hear that, hope you feel better soon!
I juste cooked dinner tofor my sister.
preposition correction
When I don't haven't pain; I feel happy and I see the world in pink, but when I am in a pain; I see the world in black.
Feedback
Good job, keep going! Hope you see the world in pink again soon~ Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
Dec. 26, 2022
Merry Christmas to you and your family and happy new year!
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I wanted to share with them, though we have not the same culture. I wanted to share with them, even though we a bit more natural I wanted to share the holidays with them, though we |
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I was delighted to do it! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today I didn't do anything else, because I am in a pain and it's a strong. Today sorry to hear that, hope you feel better soon! Today I'm sorry to hear this. |
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I juste cooked dinner to my sister. I just preposition correction I just When making something for someone, use the word for, not to. I just or I just cooked dinner with my sister. |
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When I haven't pain; I feel happy and I see the world pink, but when I am in a pain; I see the world black. When I don't have When I |
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