Dec. 24, 2022
Writing Challenge, Day 84
Today is the 84th day of my daily English challenge. I asked to my sister if accept to go by her car to Algiers, she and I, and make a surprise to our family because there are no reservation by plane because is holidays. We wish make surprise to see my nephew and my nieces and my mother here.
Writing Challenge, Day 84
Today is the 84th day of my daily English challenge.
I asked to my sister if accept to go bywe could use her car to go to Algiers, shjust me and Iher, and make a surprise to our family because there are no reservation by plane because isnt any plane tickets due to the holidays.
We wish maketo surprise to see my nephew and myour nephew, nieces, and my mother here.
Saying family would be clearer in this case
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These are all common mistakes so don't be discouraged by this!
Writing Challenge, Day 84
Today is the 84th day of my daily English challenge.
I asked to my sister if accept to go bywhether we can drive her car to Algiers, she and I, and make ao we can surprise to our family because there are no reservation by planeplane reservations are now closed because isof the holidays.
How sweet!
Alternative phrasing:
Plane reservations are closed because of the holidays so I asked my sister if we can use her car to drive to Algiers to surprise our family.
We wish maketo surprise to see mymy mother, nephew and my nieces and my mother there.
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Happy Holidays to you and yours! Good work!
Dec. 24, 2022
We wish maketo surprise to see mymy mother, nephew and my nieces and my mother there.
Best wishes for a Christmas full of joys and a New Year filled with happiness.
Dec. 24, 2022
Best wishes for a Christmas full of joys and a New Year filled with happiness.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you, too!
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Today is the 84th day of my daily English challenge. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I asked to my sister if accept to go by her car to Algiers, she and I, and make a surprise to our family because there are no reservation by plane because is holidays. I asked How sweet! Alternative phrasing: Plane reservations are closed because of the holidays so I asked my sister if we can use her car to drive to Algiers to surprise our family. I asked to my sister if |
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We wish make surprise to see my nephew and my nieces and my mother here. We wish We wish Saying family would be clearer in this case |
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